Online Class Notes (Li)[S]

Do you think people appreciate receiving handmade gifts or do they prefer more expensive store-bought gifts?

Grammar

not so laptops to be provide to other colleagues – not so many laptops available/provided for other colleagues

afraid of to the office – afraid of going to the office

I find the confirm case were increase – I found that the number of confirmed cases has increased 

bacon – baking 

First, the answer is yes. The reason is in China, children do not do a lot of housework. I think parents care about children’s learning so spend less time to do some housework. The first reason I think, we should not only focus on learning, we still need to train our children to do those houseworks that they can complete by themselves. Another reason is when we ask children to do housework, they will feel that these housework is not the responsibility of their parents, they also need to help and give some support to their parents. The last reason is, they will need to do those houseworks in the future so they will need to learn when they are young.

Revised:

First, the answer is yes/Yes, I agree. The reason is that in China, children do not do a lot of housework. I think parents care about/focused on/prioritise their children’s learning so children spend less time to do some housework/household chores. The first reason is I think we should not only focus on learning but also, we still need to train our children to do simple housework/teach them to do housework that they can complete by themselves. Another reason is/In addition, when we ask children to do housework, they will feel that doing housework is not only their parent’s responsibility, they also need to help and give some support their parents. The last reason is,/Last but not least,/Lastly, they will need to do housework in the future so they should learn when they are young.