Online Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Vocabulary

1. indoor= shi nei
ex: I like to play indoor because it’s too hot outside.
ex: I want to go to indoor park in summer because it is cool.

2. outdoor= shi wai
ex: I don’t like outdoor activities because I don’t like the sun.
ex: I don’t like to go to outdoor in autumn because it is so cold

3. vegetables= shu cai
ex: I like to eat vegetables because they’re very good for you.
ex: I like to eat vegetables because they are yummy.

4. dumplings= jiao zi
ex: I like to eat dumplings in the morning because they’re easy to make.
ex: On Spring Festival, we will eat dumplings.

5. meat= rou
ex: I don’t like meat because it’s hard to cook.
ex: I want to eat meat everyday because it tastes good.

On my 7th birthday, I have a party at the indoor park , my friend and me can play in it. At noon, my mom spend time to make a big cake for me and my friends, and my cooked rice and a few noodles. And we also made the dumplings, it’s has good taste. At night, we had a big dinner, it’s has meet, rice, potatoes, tomatoes and eggs, vegetables, apples and a few grapes. I was very enjoy for this birthday, it is fun.

Revised

On my 7th birthday, I had a party at the indoor park , my friends  and I played in it. At noon, my mom spent time to make a big cake for me and my friends, and my dad cooked rice and some noodles. And we also made the dumplings, it was really good. At night, we had a big dinner, we had meat, rice, potatoes, tomatoes, eggs, and vegetables, apples and some grapes. I enjoyed this birthday, it was fun.

I want to go to indoor park in summer because is cool
I don’t like to go to outdoor in autumn, because is so cold.
I like eat vegetables because is yummy
On spring festival, we will eat dumplings on this festival.
I want to eat meat everyday, because is has good taste.

Revised

I want to go to the indoor park in summer because it is cool
I don’t like to go to outdoor in autumn, because it is so cold.
I like to eat vegetables because they are yummy
On spring festival, we will eat dumplings on this festival.
I want to eat meat everyday, because it tastes good.