Online Class Notes (Lily) [W]

Pronunciation

tion= Shen
decision action cancellation formation mention fusion

world= were road 肉

Writing exercise

My name is Nell, i am 25 years old,my first job after graduation was at Swarovski where i worked as an administrator for 1 year. my responsibilities included perform some excel function to deal with some monthly bills, responsible for preparatory work of new retail shop and some decoration of office. then i worked as a sales assistant in firmenich which is one of the ten largest flavor companies in the world,i was responsible for order sample and maintain price use SAP, summary and analyze the monthly report and deal with some customer questionnaire . i quit from the last company because of my physical reasons,but during this time i don’t have waste time , i am having BEC lessons and attend to its exam.now my physical is good ,then i choose this job that the culture was attracted with me and this company is a big company, i trusted i will learn many things in it , the second is i think this job is similar with my advanced job content and it also approach with my career plan, i think i can identify this job ,i hope you can give me this opportunity, thank you

Revised

My name is Nell, i am 25 years old, my first job after graduation was at Swarovski where i worked as an administrator for 1 year. my responsibilities included performing some excel function to deal with some monthly bills. I was responsible for preparatory work of new retail shops and some decorations of the office. then i worked as a sales assistant in firmenich which is one of the ten largest flavor companies in the world, i was responsible for ordering sample and maintaining prices using SAP. I summarized and analyzed the monthly report and dealt with some customer questionnaires . i quit from the last company because of my physical condition. During this time I didn’t waste time , i am having BEC lessons and took the exam. Now my physical condition is better ,i like this job because I am attracted to the company culture.  this company is a big company, I believe that i will learn many things in it , the second reason is that i think this job is similar with my previous job content and it also matches with my career plan, i think I would be a good fit to this job ,i hope you can give me this opportunity, thank you