Online Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

Vocabulary

1.vet= doctor for animals
ex: Mr Bean takes his cat to the vet.

2. cage (noun)= 笼子
ex: A boy puts his mouse in a cage.
ex: Mr Bean opens the cage for the mouse.

3. lock= 锁起来
ex: I have to lock the door when I go out.
ex: When I come home, I have to unlock the door to go in.

4. fingerprint= 指纹
ex: we can use our fingerprint to unlock the door.

5. receptionist= 前台
ex: the receptionist will give you water.

In this story, Mr bean ‘s grandpa go to this room. The grandpa wear his new hat. When MB’s grandma go outside. He wants to catch the cat because the cat catch the teddy bear. Mr Bean puts the hat under the car, he thinks that is the cat in the box, but that is no in there. He goes to the hospital. That person says “wait and sit”. MB angry again. He takes the mouse out and the cat go catch it. The mouse goes under the chair and the cat goes under the chair. The people all go outside. In the box, there is no cat. He drive home, but he run on the hat, the hat broke.

Revised

In this story, Mr bean ‘s grandma goes to this room. The grandma wears her new hat. When MB’s grandma goes outside. He wants to catch the cat because the cat has the teddy bear. Mr Bean puts the hat under the car, he thinks that is the cat is in the box, but there’s nothing in there. He goes to the vet. That receptionist says “wait and sit”. MB is angry again. He opens/unlocks the cage and lets the mouse out and the cat goes and catches it. The mouse goes under the chair and the cat goes under the chair. Everyone goes outside. In the box, there is no cat. He drives home, but he runs over the hat, the hat is damaged.

There is a naughty boy who is sitting behind me. He liked talking to me in the class. But now he doesn’t talking to me in the class. There are thirty nine people in my classroom. There are nineteen girls and twenty boys. There are some naughty girls, they often play a round the stairs. They think that’s their place and we can’t go there, when I go there, they push me out.

Revised

There is a naughty boy who is sitting behind me. He liked talking to me in the class. But now he doesn’t talk to me in the class. There are thirty nine people in my classroom. There are nineteen girls and twenty boys. There are some naughty girls, they often play around the stairs. They think that’s their place and we can’t go there, when I go there, they push me out.