Online Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

Today we focused on:

did a speaking on a movie summary

Grammar

you guys are a perfect match (for each other)= 你们是天作之合

Vocabulary

1. correct (verb)= 修改
correction (noun)= 修改
ex: I need to correct your writing, give me 10 minutes please.
ex: I have many corrections to do tonight.
ex: you need to do your corrections= 你需要做订正

2. younger sister / brother=  小妹妹 小弟弟
older brother/ sister= 大哥 大姐
ex: Nia has an older brother, they have a good relationship.
ex: Lily has an older sister and a younger brother. 

3. France=法国🇫🇷
French=法国人 法语 法国的
ex: I like French food because it’s delicious!
ex: There are many French businessmen in Shanghai.
ex: The French perfume smells great.

4. smells= 闻起来
ex: Stinky tofu smells horrible.
ex: You smell so good!

Speaking

Recently I watched a soap opera and it made me very sad about the story. The soap opera is called “Liang Shen- if you can not be sad”. This is a tragic story. LS’s mother dead and accident when he was a kid. He lives with his mother’s colleague in the village. His new father gives him a new family. He has parents and a small sister again. Their life is very poor but their relationship is very great, especially LS and his sister. LS took good care of his sister all the time, and his sister also love his brother, they play with each other and studied together. They always sit at the roof to see the stars in the sky, and they are grow up with time. Both of them go to the college. At that time, their life begin to change slowly. New people come into their life and their relationship is changing gradually. Before they graduate, their parents both dead, LS learned his actual parents. He thinks his sister is the only person of his family so he don’t want to join his actual family. When LS suffered an accident, he can’t remember everything include his small sister. His grandfather take him to French to treat without tell his sister, so they separate from each other. With time, LS remember his sister, when he come back to look for his sister, everything changed. They can’t come back to before.

Revised

Recently I watched a soap opera and it made me very sad about the story. The soap opera is called “Liang Shen- if you can not be sad”. This is a tragic story. LS’s mother is dead from an accident when he was a kid. He lives with his mother’s colleague in the village. His new father gives him a new family. He has parents and a younger sister again. Their life is very poor but their relationship is very great, especially the relationship between LS and his sister. LS takes good care of his sister all the time, and his sister also loves his brother, they play with each other and study together. They always sit on top of the the roof to see the stars in the sky, and they grow up together. Both of them go to the college. At that time, their life begin to change slowly. New people come into their life and their relationship is changing gradually. Before they graduate, their parents are both dead, LS learns about his actual parents. He thinks his sister is the only person in his family so he doesn’t want to join his actual family. When LS suffers in an accident, he can’t remember anything including his younger sister. His grandfather brings him to Frence for treatment without telling his sister, so they are separated from each other. With time, LS starts to remember his sister, when he comes back to look for his sister, everything changes. They can’t go back to before.

Writing

S: Hello. What can I do for you?
C: I’m looking for a shirt to match my blue skirt.
S: Ok. We have a variety of shirts, what kinds of styles do you like? Fresh,casual or office lady?
C:Maybe casual shirts are great.
S:Well, How about this one,white shirt can fit different kinds of skirts, and white also fits your skin.
C:All right, can I have a try?
S: Of course, the fitting room is over there, I’ll take you to go there.
C:It’s nice, How much is it? Do you have any diacount?
S:Let me see, it’s 399 dollars, I can offer a twenty percent discount if you buy one.
C:That’s great, I’ll take it! Can I use my credit card to pay for it?
S:Sure, You can check out on the counter, and I will pack it up for you.
C:Ok. Thanks
S: It’s my pleasure.

Revised

S: Hello. What can I do for you?
C: I’m looking for a shirt to match my blue skirt.
S: Ok. We have a variety of shirts, what kinds of styles do you like? Fresh,casual or office lady?
C:Maybe casual shirts are great./ I prefer casual styles. 
S:Well, How about this one,white shirts can match with different kinds of skirts, and white also suits your skin.
C:All right, can I have a try?
S: Of course, the fitting room is over there, I’ll take you to go there.
C:It’s nice, How much is it? Are there any discounts?
S:Let me see, it’s 399 dollars, I can offer a twenty percent discount if you buy one.
C:That’s great, I’ll take it! Can I use my credit card to pay for it?
S:Sure, You can check out at the counter, and I will pack it up for you.
C:Ok. Thanks
S: It’s my pleasure.