Online Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

what do you look forward to at the moment?

Vocabulary

1. bunk bed = two beds : one up and one down
ex: when I was younger, I had a bunk bed in my room.

2. throw up= puke 吐
ex: we really wanted to throw up because we were really dizzy晕.

3. bumpy=not flat 凸的 不平整的
ex: This is a bumpy road, I don’t like driving on this road.
ex: The wall is a little bumpy, can you fix it?

Last week, I went to Grassland with my daughter, even the sunshine is very strong, but not very hot. The sky is very clear and we breath fresh air and ride horses. It is the first time for her to ride the horse, at the beginning, she is scared she will fall over from the horse, she wants to try because it’s very interesting. At last, the coach think we have already familiar the riding, so he began to take us to run. We feel bad because like driving in your car not in flat place, we really want to throw out. She not ride by her own, because her leg is so short. We together with other kids, two older sisters happy to look after daughter. The teacher with us, she will teach us some geographic knowledges. We also go there by train, this is the first time to have experience on the train. She like it because there is some small bed on the train so she can climb up and down. We also have a good experience live in Mongolian yurt. I just pay it with the package, it also has independent bathroom, it’s better than I thought. I was there for 7 days. The transportation is not very good because there is very large, when we from one point to another place need half day. We have a driver.

Last week, I went to the grassland in Mongolia with my daughter, even though the sunshine was very strong, but it was not very hot. The sky was very clear and we could breath fresh air and ride horses. It was the first time for her to ride the horse, in the beginning, she was scared she will fall down from the horse, she wanted to try because it’s very interesting. At last, the trainer thought that we had experience with riding, so he began to take us to run on the horse. We felt bad because it was like driving on a bumpy surface, we really wanted to throw up. She could not ride by herself/ on her own, because her legs are so short. We went together with other kids, there were two older sisters who were happy to look after my daughter. One of my friend who accompanied us was a teacher, she taught us some geographic knowledges. We also went there by train, this was her first time to have experience on the train. She liked it because there was a bunk bed on the train so she could climb up and down. We also had a good experience living in the Mongolian yurt. I just paid the package price, it also had an independent bathroom, it was better than I thought/ it exceeded/reached my expectations. I was there for 7 days. The transportation was not very convenient because it’s a tremendous/huge place, when we travel from one point to another place, it would take us need half a day= (it would take us half a day to travel from one point to another). There was a driver to drive us around. 

I don’t like to go to hospital even I don’t feel good. Because the smell in hospital is terrible, many people crowd together to make noises. Apart of that, sometimes we wait in a line for a long time, but the doctor diagnoses you only few minutes, then send you to different kind of machines then you have to go to another line to wait. So, mostly, we have to suffer in hospital more than half day.

Usually, I went to hospital once a year for medical examination, from August to October. It was not a hospital, was a medical examination center. There were many examination rooms, each room had different function. Doctor just checked my body and recorded something in your healthy document but said nothing. We can get e report 2 days later. Sometimes, I felt nervous when I got the report, I was afraid some bad things would be happened on me. I am not sure if everyone feels that when they at the same stage. When I was young, I didn’t have this kind of feels, but when I got married, had my child, everything was changed. I hope I have enough energy to manage everything, but I always feel tiered.

Revised

I don’t like to go to the hospital even when I don’t feel well, because the smell in the hospital is terrible, many people are there and to make lots of noises. Apart of that, sometimes we wait in a line for a long time, but the doctor diagnoses/ treats you for only few minutes, then send you to do different kind of test, then you have to go to another line and wait. So, mostly, we have to suffer in the hospital for more than half a day.

Usually, I go to the hospital once a year for medical examination, from August to October. It is not a hospital, it’s a medical examination center. There are many examination rooms, each room has a different function. Doctor just checked my body and recorded something in your health document but says nothing. We can get the report 2 days later. Sometimes, I feel nervous when I get the report, I am afraid if something bad would happen to me. I am not sure if everyone feels that when they are at the same stage. When I was young, I didn’t have this kind of feeling, but when I got married and gave birth to my baby, everything was changed. I hope I have enough energy to manage everything, but I always feel tired.