Online Class Notes (Lily) [S]

Pronunciation

they= day
this= dis
the= de

Grammar

ways of improve my english–> ways of improving my English
big improving–> big improvement

when my son coming home–> when my son comes home

in this way –> therefore/ as a result 因此 所以

Vocabulary

1. whereas= 然而
ex: Many people want to go to Canada, whereas Lily only wants to stay in Shanghai.

Speaking exercise

I don’t like to go shopping for me, because it’s hard for me to make a decision for many choices. I like go outside for shopping with my friends. She always give me some good advice. Actually I found the expert in the shop, if I want to buy a shirt, he always give us choice to match. In this way, I can buy some good things based on the expert ‘s suggestion. When this expert offer this service, then it save more time for us. Summer is coming, so I bought some t-shirts for my family.

Revised

I don’t like to go shopping for myself, because it’s hard for me to decide on what I like. I like to go outside shop with my friends. She always gives me some good advices. I found an expert in the shop who can always give us the right suggestions if I want to buy a shirt, he always give us choice to match. Therefore/ as a result , I can buy some good things based on his suggestions. When he offers this service, then it can help us to save more time. Summer is coming, so I bought some t-shirts for my family.