Online Class Notes (Lily) [S]

Vocabulary

1.rude= very impolite
ex: he is very rude, he says bad things to little girls.
ex: some people are very rude, they don’t line up, they just cut the line.

Should students be allowed to bring their phone to class?

When we have test, we should bring our phone to the classroom. Some students will use the phone to find out the answers. It’s cheating.

Secondly, we should turn off our phone in the classroom, then we can bring our phone to class. When we have classes, we should listen to the teacher carefully. When we use phone on the teacher’s class, it is not very good.

Thirdly, we can bring our phone to class when we have a party at school, like Christmas. When we are at party, we are very happy, we can take photos.

In conclusion, we should use our phone carefully, we shouldn’t use it bad. However, the phone will bring our trouble. When we use the phone carefully, the phone will bring us happy.

Revised

Should students be allowed to bring their phone to class?

First of all, when we have a test, some students bring their phone to the classroom. Some students will use the phone to find out the answers. It’s cheating.

Secondly, we should turn off our phone in the classroom, then we can bring our phone to class. When we have classes, we should listen to the teacher carefully. When we use the phone in class, it is very rude. 

Thirdly, we can bring our phone to class when we have a party at school, like Christmas. When we are at a party, we are very happy, we can take photos.

In conclusion, we should use our phone carefully, we shouldn’t use it inappropriately, or the phone will bring/cause us trouble. When we use the phone carefully, the phone will bring us happiness.