Online Class Notes (Lily) [S]

Grammar

I went to a trip–> I went on a trip

Vocabulary

1.primary school/ elementary school
secondary school/ high school
university/ college

bachelor =本科
master = 研究生
doctor= 博士

2. round trip ticket= 2 tickets (go and return)
ex: it’s cheaper to buy the round trip ticket than one-way ticket.

3. roller coaster = 过山车 🎢
ex: My son doesn’t like the roller coaster, he hates it.
ex: Yoyo really really likes to go on the roller coaster, she thinks it’s exciting.

I brought to WenLing, it’s the nearest beach from Shanghai, because a lot of beach nearby are not very blue, always be yellow and dirty. But the beach of WenLing is crystal blue. the traffic is not very convenient, when we arrived WL railway station, we need to take one hour and 30 mins to take the taxi to the beach. The beach there is not very commercialized, so the people go there are not very much, maybe only some local people always go there. There are no hotel near the beach, only BNB. the accommodation price near Labour Holiday is 1000 rmb, the room is not very good, it’s only 2 star hotel level. The view is very beautiful, our balcony face to the sea, no another building there. The the view in my room very very beautiful. there are a lot of seafood in WenLing, just some shrimps, oysters, mussels, their cook way very traditional and localized. Overall, the place is not very commercialized, they are developing. The first day we go there, my son didn’t play with sand successfully, because of the flood tide. We went to another village, the building in the village is very colorful. After the lunch, we went back to our hotel to the beach, and my son played with the sand successfully. I promised him this winter to bring him to play the sand.

Revised

I went to WenLing, it’s the nearest beach from Shanghai, because the other beaches nearby are not very blue, the water is polluted. But the beach of WenLing is crystal blue. the transportation is not very convenient, when we arrived WL railway station, we need to take the taxi for one hour and 30 mins to take the taxi to the beach. The beach there is not very commercialized, so there aren’t many people, maybe only some locals people always go there. There are no hotels near the beach, only BNB. the accommodation price near Labour Holiday is 1000 rmb per night, the room is not very good, it’s similar to 2 star hotel level. The view is very beautiful, our balcony faces to the sea, there are no other buildings in the way, we have a clear view of the ocean. The view in my room is very very beautiful. there are a lot of seafood in WenLing, just some shrimps, oysters, mussels, their cuisine is very traditional and localized. Overall, the place is not very commercialized, they are still  developing. The first day we went there, my son didn’t get to play with the sand successfully, because of the flood tide. We went to another village, the buildings in the village are very colorful. After the lunch, we went back to our hotel to the beach, and my son got to play with the sand successfully. I promised him last winter to take him to the beach.