Online Class Notes (Lily) [S]

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My girlfriend sent me long photo picture about an island, a lot video about the greek style dance, that was funny. A lot guys holding hands and walk in circles. Today, I will drive the scooter to eat some dimsum. Then I will back my house and read some book and drink some wine at same time.

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My girlfriend sent me a lot of photos of an island, a lot video about the greek style dance, that was funny. A lot guys were holding hands and walking in circles. Today, I will ride the scooter to eat some dimsum. Then I will go back home to read some book and drink some wine at the same time.