Online Class Notes (Lily) [S]

Vocabulary

1.commited= determined, dedicated, willing to work very hard
ex: if you want to get married, then you need to be committed to the relationship.
ex: You should be in a stable and committed relationship.

In the morning, I read about tragedy news, big forest fire broke out SiChuan province last Saturday. 30 people were losing contact in the process of extinguishing the forest fire. In the night of yesterday, 30 people were confirmed death, it’s very sorrowful. Today’s morning, many media released one of the sacrificed people exposed in his WeChat, the boy is very young, he is just married, many people feeled sorry for him. Up to fire, the fire operations are finished. So I think it is a very sadful news for me, because the majority death are very young, and their job is very dangerous. I think as a ordinary people, we should improve our safety ideas and take some measures in our daily life, because I heard the reason why the forest fire happened, because some people cigarette in the forest, and eventually caused the big tragedy. I think the people is responsible for the death of 30 people. I not sure the reality of this reason, because the local authority said the reason why the forest fire happened is under investigation.

Revised

In the morning, I read about a tragic news, a big forest fire spread out in SiChuan province last Saturday. 30 people lost contact in the process of putting out the forest fire. Last night, the 30 people were confirmed dead, it’s very sorrowful. This morning, the media released profile for one of the firemen, and exposed some of the moments in his WeChat, the boy was very young, he is just got married, many people felt sorry for him. By now, the rescue operation is finished. So I think it is a very sadful news for me, because the majority of the deads are very young, and their job is very dangerous. I think as an ordinary person, we should strengthen/raise our safety awareness and take some precautions in our daily life, because I heard the reason why the forest fire happened was due to the cigarettes in the forest, the people didn’t put out the cigarette eventually caused the big tragedy. I think the people are responsible for the death of 30 people. I’m not sure if it is the actual cause of fire, because the local authority said that the reason why the forest fire happened is still under investigation.