Online Class Notes (Li) [W / S]

Vocabulary

air fryer: a large electric cooking pot 空气气炸锅

microwave: 微波炉

oven: 烤箱

drawer: 抽屉

mop: 拖把

refund: 退还；退（款）

eg. The company refunded my money because they lost my package.

eg. My flight was cancelled so I got a refund.

These days I bought a special pan, named air-fryer. It’s very very good to use so my mother bought a lot of sweet potatoes and use the air fryer. My sister and I and my mother did this very very delicious. It can fry the sweet potatoes like you can buy in the shop. You can choose use oil not use oil. I made the chicken, the potato and the shrimp. You only need to put the food in the air-fry and wait for 20-30 minutes, like the oven.

Revised: 

These days I bought a special pot, called air-fryer. It’s very very/extremely good to use/convenient so my mother bought a lot of sweet potatoes to cook with the air fryer. My sister, my mother and I made this and it’s very very delicious. It can fry the sweet potatoes and it tastes like the store-bought ones. You can choose whether you want to add oil or not. I made the chicken, the potatoes and the shrimp. You only need to put the food in the air-fryer and wait for 20-30 minutes, similar to using the oven. 

Dear,
I heard your story and understand your Annoyance.I also need keep fit but like to eat a lot of snacks.It’s so difficult to us to manage ourselves.But I think we can eat smartly.For example,when we eat chocolates we can have a cup of Americano.We also can do much more excises in fitness room. Anyway,we must keep the health.If we are not healthy then we can’t enjoy any delicious.That is what I want to share to you,and also to myself.
yours zoe

Revised:

Dear Cheryl, 

I read about your story and understand your problem. I also need to keep fit/must maintain my health but I like to eat a lot of snacks. It’s so difficult for us to manage ourselves/our weight/health. But I think we can eat smartly. For example,when we eat chocolates we can have a cup of Americano to go with them.We can also do more exercises/exercise more at the gym. Anyway, we must maintain our health/stay healthy/keep fit. If we are not healthy then we can’t enjoy any delicious food. That is what I want to share with you and also what I tell myself.

Love/Cheers, (informal) 

Zoe