Online Class Notes (Li)

Homework

Write a letter to help the girl with the chocolate addiction.

Vocabulary

handwriting: 字迹,笔迹

eg. My handwriting is very ugly.

second:

eg. Give me 30 seconds, I need to open the door.

minute: 分钟

eg. You have two minutes left before the end of the exam.

bitter:

eg. Jerry doesn’t like bitter chocolate.

adults: 大人

eg. There are 5 adults and 2 children in this house.

giant: 巨大

eg. Everyone says that he is a giant because he is very tall.

headache: 头痛

eg. I want to go home, I have a headache.

bar: 条状物

eg. A bar of chocolate/A bar of soap/ A bar of gold

terrible: very very bad

eg. I feel terrible for lying to my friend.

Speaking

I like eating chocolate cake but I don’t like chocolate. I like eating the chocolate on the chocolate cake but I don’t like only chocolate. I don’t know why. I also like chocolate ice-cream but I don’t like hot chocolate. No, because I cannot go to buy chocolate now. My mum don’t let me eat a lot of sweet food. Usually, I will buy one box of chocolate ice-cream. If I have chocolate cake, I will eat chocolate cake. I like eat sweet chocolate but I ate one bitter chocolate and it was very very bitter. I didn’t like it.

Revised:

I like eating chocolate cake but I don’t like chocolate. I like eating the chocolate on the chocolate cake but I am not a fan of chocolate alone. I don’t know why. I also like chocolate ice-cream but I don’t like hot chocolate. No, because I cannot go out/head out` to buy chocolate now. My mum won’t let me eat a lot of sweet food. Usually, I would buy one box of chocolate ice-cream. If I have chocolate cake, I will eat it. I like to eat sweet chocolate but I ate one bitter chocolate once and it was very, very bitter. I didn’t like it.

Writing

I have a house it’s under the water. I make a red stone auto door in it, so I can go in it quickly. First you can see the floor is make it use light and it have four room, one is the living room and one is the working room and one is the bedroom and one is the Erchcinting room. I will make a meeting room and the people can sit there. This minecraft is a lot of people play together. I am in an organisation and this organisation have a lot of people and they meet together to talk so you create the meeting room.

Revised: 

I have a house and it’s located underwater. I built a red stone automatic door in it, so I can enter and exit the house quickly. First you can see that the floor is made of lights and there are four rooms. One of them is a living room, one of them is the workroom and the two other rooms are the bedroom and the Erchcinting room. I will make a meeting room so that people can meet up there. This Minecraft has a lot of people that play together. I am in an organisation and this organisation has a lot of/many people and they meet together to talk so I decided to create the meeting room.