Online Class Notes (Kyle) [S]

Original:

When I just come here Jingan Temple – this area – you know there are many fancy food places – restaurants – usually during the lunch time I will choose – but now I think its very important not to eat too much during the lunch time – I need a healthy diet – so sometimes I make the lunch box by myself in the early morning. Before this job I’m new to this job – only for half a year – before this job I have been used to my previous jobbed I can do it very well – I change my job and came here – so I think maybe its a critical period for me maybe I haven’t been used to the work pace – so far, I can stand on my own. And I’m trying to make myself stronger physically and mentally.

Edited: 

When I just arrived to  Jingan Temple – in this area – you know there are many fancy food places and restaurants – usually during the lunch time I will choose healthy options – but now I think its very important  for me personally not to eat too much during lunch time – I need a healthy balanced diet – I started a new  job half a year ago and before this job I was used to my previous job which I could do very well – I changed my job and came here so I think its a critical period for me, maybe I’m not used to the work place so far, but I am standing on my own. I’m doing my best to make myself stronger physically and mentally.

Grammar

Before this job I’m new to this job —> I started a new job 

I’m trying  —–> doing my best

Vocabulary

It is stressful to start a company …. /… I feel stressed after starting at a new company.

to be aware / have an awareness

ex. I am newly aware of this idea.

a diet which fits my personal needs —–>

ex. I am looking for a diet which fits my personal need