Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

Her husband was not admitted because someone used relationship to occupy his position. However someone’s total score was higher than his but one subject was under 60% which means someone didn’t have admitted qualify.
Still summer, he brought a bag of apples and went to a professor home. The professor was taken aback once he opened the door and saw her husband. The professor clearly knew his purpose of this coming and said I don’t know what happen and I cannot help you, you should go to find another professor then he closed door quickly. This time her husband didn’t give up again and the only one who can help him was himself.
So, He decided to stranded in front of school gate to wait Fudan headmaster until the headmaster ‘s car was coming and he went up to stand barring the way. He described his situation to headmaster but he didn’t say anything about someone’s cheating or some professor’s feedback.
After that meeting, he was admitted by world economic major but no one professor wanted to be his master tutor because of his insistence. Until the end of summer holiday,he still didn’t receive the admitted information.
How lucky he was! At last minute, Fudan university invited a very famous professor which from Harvard university to be a new professor of his major and then her husband became the famous professor’s first student in China.
Afterwards,the profess became Fudan economic and finance academy’s headmaster. It is the base of his current strong relationship and it is very important factor for his successful as well.
To be continue…

Her husband was not admitted because someone used relationship to occupy his position. However someone’s total score was higher than his but one subject was under 60% which means someone didn’t qualify to be admitted.
Still summer, he brought a bag of apples and went to a professor‘s home. The professor was taken aback when / as soon as he opened the door and saw her husband. The professor clearly knew his purpose of coming and said “I don’t know what happened and I cannot help you, you should go to find another professor” then he closed door quickly. Once again, her husband didn’t give up and knew that the only one who could help him was himself.
So, He decided to stand in front of the school gate to wait for the Fudan headmaster until the headmaster ‘s car was coming and at that moment / at which moment he went up to stand the way / to block the way. He described his situation to the headmaster but he didn’t say anything about someone cheating or some professor’s feedback.
After that meeting, he was admitted by the world economics major but none of the professors wanted to be his master tutor because of his insistence / insistent attitude. Until the end of the summer holidays,he still hadn’t received the admission information.
How lucky he was! At the last minute, Fudan university invited a very famous professor who was from Harvard university to be a new professor of his major and then her husband became the famous professor’s first student in China.
Afterwards,the professor became the Fudan economic and finance academy’s headmaster. It is the base of his current strong relationship and it is a very important factor for his success as well.
To be continued…

Vocabulary

all up / in total = yi gong

small chance / small probability
eg. there is a small chance that he will get into Harvard

1st place / 1st position / best 

mattress – the thing you sleep on at school

to study under sb

junior < > senior 

wise – adj
wisely – adv

people skills – the skill of dealing with people