Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Homework

Describe an occasion when you received good service from a company or shop.
You should say:
what company or business it was and what this company does
what the service was
who gave you the good service
where you received this good service
and explain explain why you think it was good service.

Next time u write focus on bi dong ci + make sure the time is right for every verb and think about “the” being obvious things or to make people guess which one.

Writing

My 18th birthday party is in a day after my college entrance examination. When I finished examination my friends told me will have a party to celebrate, but nobody woke up in my birthday. Because we hard study long time need used time to rest when we finish our exam. So my 18th birthday just have dinner with my family.

My 18th birthday party was on the day after my college entrance examination. When I finished the examination my friends told me, we would have a party to celebrate, but nobody woke up on / for my birthday. Because we studied hard for a long time so we needed to use some time to rest when we finished our exam. So on my 18th birthday I just had dinner with my family.

Grammar

they told me we would have a party – information
they told me “we will have a party” – what they said

I have class for 1 hour

I and my best female friend – my friend and I / me and my friend

my best friend’s birthday is 1 day after my birthday 

比动词 = is not 是, they tell the situation / describe sth (time, place, adjectives, nouns)
It is Thursday
It is 5PM
I am here
I am happy
I am a teacher