Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Homework

Read the 3 pages and write about what you’ve read. Focus on making longer sentences using conjunctions.

Writing

Today is Mother’s Day I woke up early, I spent a long time on the cards for my mom. I made two cards by paper, one was tridimensional and the other was with a paper flower. I also made a e-card on my computer, that was a homework of our English class. When I gave them to my mom, she felt happily and incredibly.

In the afternoon, I went to the XiangMi Park with my friend, my mom went with me too. We caught some little fish together, we also drew a picture of the lake and it was very beautiful. Then I went back home earlier, because of my English class. At night, my family  went to the emporium to have dinner, we ate some grill meat there, when we wanted to go home, my mom had received a bunch of red carnation from the restaurant. My mom was very happy!

Today is Mother’s Day and / so I woke up early, and (I) spent a long time on some cards for my mom. I made two cards with / by using paper, one was 3D and the other was with a paper flower / with one being 3D and the other being paper flowers. I also made an e-card on my computer, which was a homework for our English class (the reason you did it is English class). When I gave them to my mom, she felt happy and incredible.

In the afternoon, I went to the XiangMi Park with my friend, and my mom went with me too. We caught some little fish together, and we also drew a picture of the lake that / which was very beautiful. Then I went back home earlier, because of my English class. At night, my family went to the (shopping) mall to have dinner, and we ate some grilled meat there / where we ate some grilled meat. When we wanted to go home, my mom had received a bunch of a red carnation from the restaurant. My mom was very happy that day / I think my mum had a great mothers day!

Vocabulary

which = to add new information
that = to tell me which one

grilled – meat that has been cooked on a hot plate
eg. I had a grilled sandwich for lunch

universe – everything, all the stars and planets
eg. the universe is huge and contains many planets