Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Next Class Focus

lots to review from the writing so make sure Amy is ok with all the corrections.

Grammar

i have many free time – I have a lot of free time

I have a coffee. I bought it in Shanghai. = I have a coffee that I bought in Shanghai.

I have a coffee. It has no milk. = I have a coffee that has no milk.

I know that Amy is a Chinese girl. = I know Amy is a Chinese girl.

Writing exercise

In 10 years, I guess I will have 2 babies and have a dessert shop with my friends. As work, I think I will become a teacher, work in university. Maybe I can have travel once or twice a year that I will see many different culture and scenery and I can record that. I want take video when I traveling and show that given people who don’t have chance go to many countries. For dessert shop, I will manage it with my best girl friend and I will study cooking skill in France or in shanghai. About my family, I want give more time in my family and give my husband more free time, if he like play games or like travel is more be better because that we can have more things to do with together. And I pray I can become neighbor with my friends that I can make many food give them. That is all of my life in 10 year in my dream.

In 10 years, I guess I will have 2 babies and have a dessert shop with my friends. As work / Regarding work / for work / in terms of work, I think I will become a teacher, and work in a university. Maybe I can have travel once or twice a year that / which can show me many different cultures and scenery and I can record that / it. I want to take videos when I travel and show that / it to give people who don’t have the chance to go to many countries. For dessert shop, I will manage it with my best girl / female friend and I will study cooking skill in France or in Shanghai. About my family, I want to give more time to my family / spend more time with my family and give my husband more free time, and if he likes to play games or like to travel, I think it’s better because (then) we can have more things to do with together. And I pray I can become a neighbor with my friends / live near my friends then I can make a lot of food to give them. That is my whole life / all of my life in 10 years in my dream.