Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

When it comes to the job i would like to have,it must be a lawyer.In my opinoin,it means justice and more money.Even though there are good and bad lawyers,but i believe that the good make up more .The lawyer is which can help people who is in trouble.On the one hand ,it has the ability to send person who is lawbreaking to the jail.On the other hand ,it also can help anyone who is under the pressure of power out of the horrible situaition.I don’t know whether i am competent to the job or not,but i will try my best.This profession needs the man have the sense of justice and responsibility ,furmore good heathy is also necessary.Everyone knows that the law and morality is not always consistent and sometimes it’s hard to satisfy both ,so the lawyer must be very strong in heart to bear all the speech.For me ,if i have a chance to go back to 18,i would study the law and work hard to be a really good lawyer.No matter how difficult the exam is or how much i have to bear,it’s not a problem to me in that the law and the medicine is the same difficult and if i can pass the latter ,so does the former.

When it comes to the job i would like to have,it must be a lawyer. In my opinion, it means / stands for / represents justice and means more money. Even though there are both good and bad lawyers, but i believe that the good make up more. The lawyer is a profession which can help people who are in trouble. On the one hand ,it has the ability to send people who are breaking the law to the jail. On the other hand , it also can help anyone who are under political pressure out of the horrible situation. I don’t know whether i am competent to the job or not, but i will try my best. This profession needs the someone who has a sense of justice and responsibility , furthermore good health is also necessary. Everyone knows that the law and morality is not always consistent and sometimes it’s hard to satisfy both ,so a lawyer / so lawyers must be very strong in their heart to bear it all. For me, if i have a chance to go back to 18, i would study the law / study law and work hard to be a really good lawyer. No matter how difficult the exam is or how much i have to bear,it’s not a problem for me in that the law and the medicine are the same difficulty and if i can pass the latter , then I can also pass the former.


I am who can help you = I am the person that can help you
I am the teacher who is named Jesse. = I am the teacher and I am named Jesse.

I am a lawabiding person < > I am a criminal
I follow the law < > I break the law

he is 15 years old, a boy, he doesn’t like study, it’s very bad – he is 15 and is a boy who doesn’t like studying which is very bad.

my mother called me back – finally / eventually 

this makes me think about children education

discipline – the act of setting rules and making people follow them
eg. I think discipline is important for kids

the most thing is – the main thing / the most important thing