Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]
Writing exercise
Dear Thomas, Jackie and Tracy,
Hope this mail finds you all well.
It was a pleasure to meet you all and thank you for making time for me during the visit on last week. Currently we have around 200 days until we open the hotel, which means there is some work to be done including finishing the budgeting..
During the visit we have completed the first round of competitor surveys for the below 8 hotels.
– Howard Johnson Zunyue Hotel Chengdu
– Crowne Plaza Chengdu Panda Garden
– Crowne Plaza Chengdu West
– Crowne Plaza Chengdu Wenjiang
– Hyatt Place & Hyatt House Chengdu Peeble Walk
– Holiday Inn Chengdu High-Tech Center
– Holiday Inn Chengdu Xindu
– Argyle Hotel
As well as this, we also learned from Chengdu market leaders, of each segment, during the appointment, providing us with some valuable insights and suggestions, which are crucial for us to clearly understand the local domestic culture to ensure we’re able to have a successful launch of our future initiatives.
– Ctrip – Mr. Sky Ren – BU of Hotels and other Accommodations of General Manager West China
– ETG MICE – Mr. Xu Zhaofeng – MC of Sichuan radio and television, Tour & live radio presenter
– Media Ms. Le Yen – MC of Sichuan radio and television, Tour & live radio presenter
Top Priorities for this month:
Visit follow up – Competitor survey SWOT report by July 20 (template attached)
Visit follow up – Chengdu market leader opinion highlight and follow up report by July 15 (use smart report template as attached )
Opening
Grammar
, – use commas to separate parts of the sentence
eg. I went to the shops, which is near my house, and bought some food
I like coffee
I like drinking
Coffee is good
Drinking is good
engagement
engage
happiness
happy
satisfy
satisfied
satisfaction
The china sales mission just finished. = the china sales mission just finishing is really good = finishing is really good
Coffee tastes good. = coffee tasting good is really common
The meeting was good – Having the meeting was good
Due to the meeting, I am tired. = due to having the meeting, I am tired. = due to having the meeting with my colleagues, I am tired.
Due to the China Sales Mission just finished on last Friday and I keep on the road to visit our new ChengDu property. = Due to the China mission just finishing on last Friday, I’m visiting our New Chengdu property this week.
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