Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Homework

Correct this yourself (focus on conjunctions)

Then i went outside but i didn’t have any strength to walk, then i slept on the chair at the moment , when it was 11.pm , i awake , i check my phone , i found my mum call me many times but i did not any back and then she send me a message : if you do not call me back , i will call police , Suddenly i back to my mum and said i will back home now , meantime the nervous feeling occupy my whole body , my drunk disappear ,then i call the taxi and back to my home.

Writing exercise

i usually go to the cafe bar which is located at the People Square before. I always order the beer that name is Tiger , i think that smell and taste is nice. it only have a little bitter. the another beer brand maybe is Carlsberg ( i forgot), it tastes a little sour , but i more like tiger . of course its price is the cheapest . i like beer, because it makes me relax , i always drink the beer meanwhile i am in a daze, i remember an interesting things about it , One day , My boss 、my colleague and i went to a restaurant where we eat crayfish, we also order beer. at first, we each order a bottle of beer , at finally we had a total of seven beers , at first i did not any feeling , i took a taxi to Xujiahui and i wanna walk around in Metro city , suddenly i wanna go to restroom to pee, when i stand , i felt a little dizzy and i want to vomit , then i felt tired so i sleep in the restroom , Suddenly , the women knock down the door and asked: are you OK , i said i am fine ,then i go outside but i did not any strength to walk , then i slept on the chair at the moment , when it was 11.pm , i awake , i check my phone , i found my mum call me many times but i did not any back and then she send me a message : if you do not call me back , i will call police , Suddenly i back to my mum and said i will back home now , meantime the nervous feeling occupy my whole body , my drunk disappear ,then i call the taxi and back to my home

i used to often go to the cafe bar which is located in the People Square before. I always order the beer which is named/ that is called Tiger, and i think it smells and tastes is nice and it only tastes a little bitter. the Another / the other beer brand which is named Carlsberg, it tastes a little sour , but I like Tiger better / more. Of course its price is the cheapest . i like beer, because it makes me relax and I like to zone out while I drink. I remember an interesting experience I once had while drinking beer. One day , My boss 、my colleague and i went to a restaurant where we ate crayfish, and drank beer. At first, we each ordered a bottle of beer, and finally we had a total of seven beers. At first i didn’t have any feeling, and / so / and then i took a taxi to Xujiahui and i wanted to walk around in Metro city, but suddenly i wanted to go to the restroom to pee, when i stood up, i felt a little dizzy and i wanted to vomit. Then i felt tired so i slept in the restroom. Suddenly , the women knock on the door and asked me “are you OK” , i said “i am fine”. Then i went outside but i didn’t have any strength to walk, then i slept on the chair at the moment , when it was 11.pm , i awake , i check my phone , i found my mum call me many times but i did not any back and then she send me a message : if you do not call me back , i will call police , Suddenly i back to my mum and said i will back home now , meantime the nervous feeling occupy my whole body , my drunk disappear ,then i call the taxi and back to my home

Grammar

Common conjunctions: and / but / so / because / when / if / therefore / however / while

it tastes nice = the taste is nice

I like to zone out while I drink

I have a pen which is black.
My pen which is black is good.
My pen
which is black is really good for writing.