Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

Yesterday I read a piece of news from website which is related to the international Emmy Awards. As we know, international Emmy awards normally grants some TV programs or Television workers which are outside America, but in 2020, the organizer of Emmy Awards announced that the winner was Andrew Cuomo,the Governor of New York. This is the first time for the Emmy Awards and make me curious to explore the reason, so I read the whole announcement which explained the story. The announcement said, from the first epidemic news conference which was held in Mar. 2, Cuomo shared the new data of Covid19 to public, presented effective policy, and point out the importance for wearing masks and keeping social distance. As per the data from TV rating report, the news conference attract more than 60million Americas to watch. Under Cuomo’s leadership, New York’s epidemic was being controlled gradually, the number of inpatients of decreased from 18,825 to 1,220 in 2 months. Now New York is the lowest positive rate of swab test among all states of America, that was the reason in that Cuomo could get this award.

Yesterday I read a piece of news from website which is related to the international Emmy Awards. As we know, the Emmys normally grants the award to some TV programs or Television workers which are outside America, but in 2020, the organizer of the Emmys / the Emmy awards announced that the winner was Andrew Cuomo,the Governor of New York. This is the first time for the Emmy Awards and made me curious to explore the reason, so I read the whole announcement which explained the story. The announcement said, from the first epidemic news conference which was held in Mar. 2, Cuomo shared the new data of Covid19 to the public, presented effective policy, and pointed out the importance of mask wearing and keeping social distance / and social distancing. As per the data from the TV ratings report, the news conference attracted more than 60 million Americans (to watch). Under Cuomo’s leadership, New York’s epidemic was being controlled gradually, with the number of inpatients of decreasing from 18,825 to 1220 in 2 months. Now, New York has the lowest rate of positive swab tests among all states of America, which was the reason in that Cuomo could get this award.

Grammar

conjunction – you can make a full sentence using verbs after
I have a cup of coffee and it is really good.
I had a cup of coffee and it was really good.
I have been drinking a cup of coffee and it has been really good

preposition – can only add details, nouns, simple verbs (to do)
I went to Japan to have fun.
I went to Japan to be happy

which – adds new / important detail
eg. I have a pen which is black = you didn’t know it was black
that – just says which one
eg. the pen that is red, is really good, but the pen that is black is terrible

Under Cuomo’s leadership, New York’s epidemic was being controlled gradually, which included a decreased in the number of inpatients from 18,825 to 1220 in 2 months.

Under Cuomo’s leadership, New York’s epidemic was being controlled gradually, with the number of inpatients of decreasing from 18,825 to 1220 in 2 months.

Under Cuomo’s leadership, New York’s epidemic was being controlled gradually, in that the number of inpatients decreased from 18,825 to 1220 in 2 months.

I have many amazing students with Denise being the best.
Denise did really well in this writing, with only 10 mistakes.

the importance of wearing masks is obvious

Vocabulary

9000
9543
10,000
12,430

as usual / like normal / as normal / as per the usual 
eg. I will give you homework like normal / as per the usual / as I usually do

they decreased shortlyquickly 
shortly = soon
eg. I will go to the park shortly

the media narrative – what the media is talking about
eg. Trump likes to control the media narrative

progressive society – societites that change and progress a lot and keep up with modern ideas
eg. I prefer europe because it is a more progressive society

it’s very culturally diverse 

gold rush

scenic – beautiful / lovely to look at
eg. Australia is a very scenic country