Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

700 billionï¼A new record of double 11 in China! The news has been reported in medias all over the world. We could find some interesting figures from the reports:over 15million kinds of products join the promotion; the products are from 140 thousands of brands including 60 thousands of international brand; 700 billion business is formed by 2 billion and 250 million orders. Besides the figures, some newly things were built in the double 11 which could attract the consumer to join the event, for example : Live stream, online carnival,pre order. Now we can believe that double 11 is the most important sales period to all brands, so a lot of brands invest a lot in this event. But to me, my enthusiasm is getting lower and lower because during that period, there are too many promotion information, and you will get a lot of messages or mails from different brands which are pretty annoyed, and you will waste time to read and compare the price and buy something which are unnecessary.

700 billionï¼A new record of double 11 in China! The news has been reported by media outlets / reported all over the world. We could find some interesting figures from the reports:over 15 million different item types / different SKUs joined the promotion; the products are from 140 thousands of brands including 60 thousands of international brands; 700 billion RMB of business came from 2 billion and 250 million orders / 2.25 billion orders. Besides the figures, some newly things were built during the double 11 which could attract the consumers to join the event, for example : Live stream, online carnival / performance,pre order. Now it’s clear / From this we can see that double 11 is the most important sales period for all brands, so a lot of / many / plenty of / a large number of / numerous brands invest a lot in this event. But to me, my enthusiasm is getting lower and lower because during that period, there are too many promotional information, and you will get a lot of messages or emails from different brands which are pretty annoying, and you will waste time to read and compare the prices and buy things which are unnecessary.

Grammar

Healthy food is important for us = the effect / result
My husband is important to me = your feeling / you think

There are 20 friends of Jesse’s
There 100 employees of Smart English

only put the “and” after the hundred number.

I have thousands of hairs on my head – thousands = noun
I have 3 thousand hairs on my head – thousand = number

My son is 3 years old
I have a 3 year old son

every year double 11 only 1 day – double 11 is only for 1 day every day

JD, and some other elseand some other platforms

they think another waythey have another idea / they think about it in a different way / they have their own opinion 

Vocabulary

obviously – easy to know / of course

definitely – 100%