Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Writing exercise

First of all,I am very happy to be shortlisted to attend this interview. My name is Ivy.I’m 30 years old,I was born and raised in SH. I quit in Sep,so I can start to work by any time. For 8 years,I served at trading companies in the garment field. I chose to rebuild my career life for personal growth.I souce qualified factory,check and provide quotation sheet to customer and work with internal and external different departments,follow up orders,ensure products are good quality and delivered on time..
My major job included two parts in details:
Part one:follow up the whole process from garment order placement to delivery smoothly and timely.Sometimes I work as a troubleshooter and at the same time find the solution to avoid similar future problems.On one hand, monitor all samples to be provided on time by factory,on the other hand,I translate customerā€™comments for supply to ensure them understand customerā€™s request and produce qualified clothing.Besides that,I arrange all the testing requested by customer.
Part two: handle the whole logistics of import and export process. Sometimes we also imported fabric from foreign countries to make clothes.I check all shipping details with supply,book shipping space from forwarder,make all documents for customs declaration.Arrange factory to delivery the bulk products to warehouse on time.

I think Iā€™m the right person for this postion, because
Firstly,Iā€™m a very results and consumer oriented person, Iā€™m self-motivated by my work, always seeking to give the best results and benefits for the company I work for.
Secondly,my friends and previous colleagues describe me as a responsible person, I take everything I do seriously, once I make a commitment, I will see it through and never break my promise.
Last but not least,I am a good team player and a quick learner.I love to cooperate with different people,Iā€™m willing to learn and willing to share.
I understand one of your misson is to deliver the highest design and quality solution to increasingly demanding fashion industry,thatā€™s why I am deeply attracted by your company and I also believe I myself can easily fit in the culture of your company if I have the honour to be a part.
I deeply enjoy being a X and I could see myself continue working in your company in the year to come.
Thank you!

First of all, I am very happy to be shortlisted to attend this interview. My name is Ivy and I’m 30 years old, and was born and raised in SH. I finished at my previous company in September, so I am available to start at any time. For 8 years, I served at trading companies in the garment field. I choseĀ to make some changes to my careerĀ for the purpose of personal growth. Basically, I’m in charge of the whole logistics process for import and export, from sourcingĀ qualified factories, to checking and providing quotation sheets to customers, work with internal and external departments, following up orders, and ensuring products are of good quality and delivered on time.Ā 
My main job included two parts in detail:

Part one: follow the whole process from garment order placement to the smooth and timely delivery. Sometimes I work as a troubleshooter and at the same time find the solution to avoid similar future problems. Throughout the ordering process, I monitor all samples to be provided on time by factory, while translating customerā€™ comments for the supplier to ensure they understand the customerā€™s request and are able to fulfill the order accurately. Besides that, I arrange all the testing requested by customers.
Part two: handle all logistics of the import and export process. Sometimes we also imported fabric from foreign countries to make garments. I check all shipping details with suppliers, book shipping space from forwarder, arrange factories to deliver the bulk products to warehouse on time, and finally make all documents for customs declaration.

I think Iā€™m the right person for this postion, || because honestly || as soon as I read the job description || I felt || “that sounds like me” || I’ve always been a very results and people oriented person ||, and have been quite self-motivated in my work ||, always trying as hard as I can || to make sure that, what I do in my job ||Ā  gives the best results || and benefits the company I work for.

My friends and previous colleagues have always described me as a responsible person, || I take everything I do seriously, || and once I make a commitment, ||Ā I will see it through || and never break my promise. This is the kind of person I am. I really enjoy working with other people, and learning new things really is a passion of mine.Ā 

I understand one of your missons is to deliver the highest design and quality solution to an increasingly demanding fashion industry, and for me, this really fits well with me as I really enjoy working with amazing people, who I can work with to focus on good design and solution for our customers, and watch the whole process of making garments, from sketch to the final production of the garment – the whole process makes me feel really proud and great to be a part of it.

So, I think I’d love being part of your company, and I really hope I get the chance to work with you in the near future.Ā 

Vocabulary

that’s a reliefĀ 

main / majorĀ 

Pronunciation

argentina = “ar jen teen na”Ā