Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

Homework

review and correct this yourself if you can.

At final, i took a photo with Richard Clayderman and get his signature. when my health get better, i started to looking for job after Spring Festival, it tooks 2-3 months to did it , i thought i need took more time to did it, To my surprise, the company which is i work now hired me on May, then i experienced many difficult problems on work , it made me crazy till now,all in all i think i have vastly change than before

Today we focused on:

Went through the writing word by word and corrected it very slowly, learning and discussing each point in detail until it was understood perfectly and able to be recreated.

Writing exercise

what is my unforgettable experience? i think all things (that these two years was happened became unforgettable experience for me/ that these two years is unforgettable experience for me), because i experienced have a sickness , i did not do everything i like it those time including no playing outside with my friends, no drinking and no going to the gym, i only stayed at home or went to work so that i can’t release my pressure, i think i had a little mental problem those time ,then i choose quit my job then i stayed at home for half years .by the way, i achieved my dream this January, i went to Hangzhou to watch concert ,at final, i took a photo with Richard Clayderman and get his signature. when my health get better, i started to looking for job after Spring Festival, it tooks 2-3 months to did it , i thought i need took more time to did it, To my surprise, the company which is i work now hired me on May, then i experienced many difficult problems on work , it made me crazy till now,all in all i think i have vastly change than before

what is my unforgettable experience? i think all things that happened to me for these last few years were unforgettable, because i experienced having a sickness / I experienced being sick, i did not do anything that i like it at that time including no playing outside with my friends, no drinking and no going to the gym. i only stayed at home or went to work so that i couldn’t release my pressure. i think i had a little mental problem at that time. Then i chose to quit my job and stay at home for half a year .by the way, i achieved my dream this January, because i went to Hangzhou to watch a concert. At final, i took a photo with Richard Clayderman and get his signature. when my health get better, i started to looking for job after Spring Festival, it tooks 2-3 months to did it , i thought i need took more time to did it, To my surprise, the company which is i work now hired me on May, then i experienced many difficult problems on work , it made me crazy till now,all in all i think i have vastly change than before

Vocabulary

book signing – an event that you can get your book signed by a famous author at
eg. I went to a book signing

backstage – the place that the celebrities use to prepare for / wait for their performance
eg. I met him backstage!

Grammar

I have a cup that / which I use for coffee to drink every day.
I think every phone call that comes to my phone is bad
I did everything that I like
I think everything that you like is good.