Online Class Notes (Jesse) [W]

upgrade some of the writing vocabulary to more natural spoken english vocab

Grammar

much things to do – many things to do / a lot to do 

I think it’s not – I don’t think he will 

it was the entire of my daily life – that was just my daily life 

she is as same age as me – she is the same age as me / she is as old as me 

a few money – a little money 

Vocabulary

go into debt – to owe money to someone / bank
eg. if you buy a house you need to go into debt

anything they want / whatever they want

would like = polite way to say “i want”

When I was a student which so young and innocent, I though money was nothing. I used to look down people who always wish to be a millionaire. I thought it was not great when people talked about money, also when others such like last generation wanted to give me an idea like money was everything, I would like to reconsider the relationship between us. I was too stubborn and serious with money. But things will change with age and experience. Around the period I graduated from college, I finally earned money by myself and started my career, I realized money was so important, and I need money all the time. And I noticed rich guys looked so relax and they could do everything they wanted easily, just because they were rich. Then I suddenly had a strong wish which was to be rich, and I thought it’s no doubt that I could be rich someday. However, life was always kidding, I started to know rich was made from the intelligence, the diligence, and the most important part – luck. It is impossible that everyone is lucky enough to be a rich man, but it is possible to earn more money by yourself, also money will never be enough. Looking forward, I will try my best to be happy and relax, and also try to earn more money, but whether I could be rich or not I would like to up to the god’s decision.

When I was a student who / that was so young and innocent, I thought money was nothing. I used to look down on people who always wish / want to be a millionaire. I thought it was not great when people talked about money, also when others like the / such as the last generation wanted to give me an idea that money was everything, so I would / I wanted to reconsider the relationship between us. I was too stubborn and serious with money. But things will change with age and experience. Around the period I graduated from college, I finally earned money by myself and started my career, so I realized money is so important, and I always need money. And I noticed rich guys looked / look so relaxed and they could / can do everything they wanted / want / whatever they want easily, just because they were / are rich. Then I suddenly had a strong wish which was to be rich, and I thought it’s no doubt / and I had no doubt that I could be rich someday. However, life was always kidding / life is so unfair, I started to know rich was made from the intelligence, the diligence, and the most important part – luck. It is impossible that everyone is lucky enough to be rich, but it is possible to earn more money by yourself… plus money will never be enough / you can never have enough money. Looking forward, I will try my best to be happy and relaxed, and also try to earn more money, but whether I could be rich or not I would like to leave it up to god. / leave it up to fate.