Online Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

Next Class Focus

First part, Jesse helps to say and write, 2nd part Miranda does herself without Jesse asking questions. Focus is: 3rd person, conjunctions, using pronouns instead of Mr Bean.

Homework

Write about the most fun time you’ve had with Candy – what did you do with her? Focus on: using “her / she” instead of “candy”

Speaking exercise

We did this together because Miranda didn’t feel like speaking. This part is from me, the rest is from Miranda.

She felt angry because she found Mr Bean watching her when she was sleeping so she kicked him out! Mr Bean sleeps on the bench at the park. Mr Bean think a bird is a toothbrush and he use it to brush his teeth. Mr Bean uses the table to make a trashcan. Mr Bean looks in the newspaper and he spot a house. He wants to rent a room so he goes to see a lady and looks at her room and says it is ok, and then he goes downstairs to have lunch but the lady tricked him, she put a crocodile on the table and she blows a trumpet, so Mr Bean runs away and goes to another house. The 2nd house is outside and it has a sign – cannot have teddybear, so Mr Bean went to another house. The 3rd house has so many animals and trees. Mr Bean go inside and the man lead him to a farm – it has a old bed and it has pigs, and mud, and he feels disgusting, yucky. Mr Bean walk to the door and knock on the door and an old woman came. The woman ask for money, then Mr Bean give the money to the woman so the woman let her in. There is a worker stop the music and then they drive the car away. Mr Bean knock on the wall and it’s not a real house. Mr Bean went back on the car.

Corrections

She feels angry because she finds Mr Bean watching her when she is sleeping so she kicked him out! Mr Bean sleeps on the bench at the park and he thinks a bird is a toothbrush and he uses it to brush his teeth. Mr Bean uses the table to make a trashcan and he looks in the newspaper and he spots a house. He wants to rent a room so he goes to see a lady and looks at her room and says it is ok, and then he goes downstairs to have lunch but the lady tricks him – she puts a crocodile on the table and she blows a trumpet, so Mr Bean runs away and goes to another house. The 2nd house is outside and it has a sign which says “cannot have teddybears”, so Mr Bean goes to another house. The 3rd house has so many animals and trees. Mr Bean goes inside and the man leads him to a farm – it has an old bed and it has pigs, and mud, and he feels it is disgusting, and yucky. Mr Bean walks to the door and knocks on the door / on it and an old woman comes and she asks for money, then Mr Bean gives the money to the woman / to her so the woman  / so she lets him in. There is a worker who stops the music and then they drive the car away. Mr Bean knocks on the wall and it’s not a real house. Mr Bean goes back to the car.