Online Class Notes (Jesse) [S]

A man carries a wood to the house, then Mr Bean is watching TV. Mr Bean hears a sound from the other room. It is a man is using a hammer. I think he wants to hammer the wood. Then Mr Bean use his hand to knock it, and the man use the hammer to knock it again. Finally, a picture dropped from the wall and the picture broked. Mr Bean holds a candle stick and knocked the wall. The man is getting the wood. However, the shelf dropped on the man. Mr Bean takes the TV to the kitchen and he carries the chair to the kitchen. He sits on the chair and opened the TV. The lion chomped the Dr’s head then Mr Bean laughs because he thinks it is funny. The baby cries and cries. Mr Bean hears it and Mr Bean move the TV to the garden. He hears a noise then he sees a boy who is kicking a soccer ball. Mr Bean goes down to watch the TV or to change a place to watch. Mr Bean sees the ball stop beside him. The boy says it is my ball and Mr Bean didn’t give the ball back. The boy go down and he kicks the dog house, then the dog runs out and he barked. Mr Bean hears it and he feels mad again.

A man carries a piece of wood to the house, and meanwhile Mr Bean is watching TV. Mr Bean hears a sound from the other room which is a man is using a hammer. I think he wants to hang the wood. Then Mr Bean uses his hand to knock it, and the man uses the hammer to knock it again. Finally, a picture drops from the wall and the picture breaks. Mr Bean holds a candle stick and knocks the wall and the man is getting the wood. However, the shelf drops on the man and Mr Bean takes the TV to the kitchen and he carries the chair there and he sits on the chair and turns on the TV. The lion chomps the Dr’s head. Then Mr Bean laughs because he thinks it is so funny. Suddenly a baby starts crying. Mr Bean hears it and Mr Bean moves the TV to the garden. He hears a noise again and he sees a boy who is kicking a soccer ball. Mr Bean goes down to watch the TV or to change a place to watch. He sees the ball stop beside him. The boy says it is my ball but Mr Bean didn’t give the ball back. The boy goes down and he kicks the dog house, and the dog runs out and he barks. Mr Bean hears it and he feels mad again.

3rd person 
don’t repeat subjects / Mr Bean / he – just use “and + verb” 
which + who to add details 
every sentence should have conjunctions

I have a dog. The dog is funny = I have a dog which is funny 
Mr Bean had some milk. Mr Bean was thirsty = Mr Bean had some milk and he was thirsty / since he was thirsty.
Mr Bean have black hair. Mr Bean is funny = Mr Bean has black hair and he is funny. 
Mr Bean has a pizza. Mr Bean eats the pizza. = Mr Bean has a piece of pizza and he eats it. 

the rain is big – the rain is heavy / in HK it’s raining very heavily 

I am sweat – I am sweaty