Online Class Notes (Ally)[S/W]

work on P3 and conclusion

Vocabulary

miniscule: 微小

Grammar

thought vs thinking
– small single thought
– thinking – big concept

V and O must match – “learn” a test -> take a test
ie. I must study the IELTS
-I must study (V) for the IELTS (not O)
-I(S) must take(V)the IELTS test(O).

“same old same old”

A, B, C, and D. -> A and B/A or B not A, B

before = time marker always at the beginning

绝对性 – 检查accuracy

In contrast/On the other hand/While/On the contrary

From this aspect/In this way

I will go to UK before I have to learn a language test online.
I have to take a language test online before I go to the UK.
I will/can go to the UK after I pass the language test online.
I need to pass the test to go to the UK.

I have a thinking when I wrote the essay. I remain improve my vocabulary. If I focus on writing and practice more, I think I will be better.
I had a feeling/thought when I finished (writing) the essay. I still have to improve my vocabulary.

As the same levels and same skills, good-looking people will get more chances. That’s phenomenon is very normal in worldwide. People like good-looking people more than ugly-looking people. Opposite, there is 5%possibility that people like ugly-looking people. Perhaps they have personality charm.

When students graduated from university and then go to a company for work as an intern. They don’t have more work skills, social experience, however good-looking people is the best advantage.

My friend is a sale man and work at a famous company. There are higher pressure on the work ( sale target, relationship with colleagues, customer and boss). This moment, good-looking people always get more purchase orders from clients. At office, Colleagues more likely community with good-looking people.

George Clooney is a famous superstar in worldwide. He is a classic good-looking people. He is an idol of a lot of people. He is very kindly to help people otherwise he obtained more reputation.

In conclusion, there are many good-looking people in the worldwide. “Good looking always give them more chances, by contrast, it’s not fair to ugly-looking people.

Edited:

Intro.
– background + connection + thesis (整个essay的论点)
P1
– claim/state 1 (段落论点) + example 1+ ending(总结论点)
P2
– claim/state 2 (段落论点) + example 2 + ending(总结论点)
Conclusion
– Connection + summary claim 1/2 + ending (可以是对未来的展望, personal feeling, blahblahblah)

All of us have to work hard to get a better life, but some people have an easier way. Even when they have the same levels and the same skills, good-looking people will get more chances. That phenomenon is very normal worldwide/everywhere in the world. Everybody likes good-looking people more than ugly-looking people. On the other hand, of course/obviously there is a possibility that people would like ugly-looking people due to their personality charm. From this aspect, even though it’s unfair, good-looking people have more advantages while ugly people may have to work harder.

In the workplace, young beauty undoubtedly gives people an upper-hand. When young students graduate from university and then go to a company to work as an intern/for internship, they don’t have any work skills or social experience. However, good looks and youth/young age is their best advantage. Bosses everywhere are happy to see these pretty faces working at their company. Mood is very important, because it boosts efficiency.

In addition to giving your boss a good mood, good looks in the workplace has actual advantages. My friend is a salesman at a famous company and he told me many times about his work situation. There are high pressures at his work, such as meeting sales target, relationship with colleagues, customer and boss. At this moment, good-looking people always get more purchase orders from clients. At office, Colleagues are also more likely community with good-looking people. These are just some small but realistic examples of the advantages that good looks can bring.

(Claim?)George Clooney is a famous superstar in worldwide. He is a classic good-looking people. He is an idol of a lot of people. He is very kindly to help people otherwise he obtained more reputation.

In conclusion, there are many good-looking people in the worldwide. “Good looking always give them more chances, by contrast, it’s not fair to ugly-looking people.

Pronunciation

charm – charrrm (hear er)

normal – normal (hear er)