VIP Class Notes (Li) [S]

Vocabulary

water park: a big outdoor space with pools and slides

art gallery: a public place that stores art pieces such as painting

appealing; pleasing or attractive
eg. living overseas is really appealing to me

Coffin: a box in which a dead person is buried

Pyramid: large structure built in Egypt that has a square base and pointy top

hiked: to walk a long distance
eg. we hiked for about 2 hours

genre: used to describe a type or category of film, art or book
eg. the genre of music I like best is rock

Last week, we went to another city. There is a big place we can play water in it. I went with three friends from noon to night, about six to seven hours. I think it is okay, it was not very tiring. Usually when we went to the water park, that was the last day when the waterpark open. The next day the park was close. We didn’t play so tired.

It is the first time I went to play in the waterpark. I went to every city, I like to visit the museum. Different museum has different things. I like some interesting museum and some art museums. I also went to the art gallery in Holland which I really like cause it was interesting.

Revised: 

Last week, we went to another city. There is a big place where we can play with water/we went to the water park. I went with three friends from noon till night time – about six to seven hours. I think it is okay, it was not very tiring.  Usually When we went to the waterpark, that was the last day when the waterpark was opened. The next day the park was closed. We didn’t play so tired. We were not so tired.

It is the first time I went to play a waterpark. When I visit every city,, I like to visit the museums. Different museums have different things. I like some art museums. I also went to the art gallery in Holland which I enjoyed because it was interesting.

I think in China, museum are not very interesting because there are too many things. Other city like Holland or Japan, I visits the Van Gogh museum…The things they show in the museum are different, which are interesting.

Revised: 

I think in China, museums are not very interesting because there are too many things. Other cities like Holland or Japan, I have visited the Van Gogh museum…The things they show in the museum are very different, which is interesting.

Pronunciation

kinds: kain -ds

sports: spore-ts

recognition: re-cog-ni-tion (break it down, repeat then speed up)