F2F Class Notes (Whitney) [S + W]

Vocabulary

scuba diving [n] 潜水

drowning [v] to die through being under water and unable to breathe

feasible [adj]able to do something, possible

stellar [adj]relating to stars, high quality, great performance
That singer was great, what a stellar performance! 

Original

Our manager and CFO approved the practicability of this system, and then delivered to CEO for agreement. Through two months’ endeavor, we ultimately accomplished this work and of which we got a great affirmation. That time we performed as teammates with coordination , not with personal competitive statement, which we thought was the best work statement.

Corrected + Upgraded
Our manager and CFO approved the feasibility  practicability of this system and then it was delivered to the CEO for agreement [approval/their green light]. Through a two month endeavour, we ultimately accomplished this work and of which we got a great affirmation from our CFO. That time We performed as teammates with effective coordination and without not with personal agenda competitive statement, which we thought was the best working method [attitude/practise] statement.

feasible: can do, no problems, practical

The delivery man was sending our packages over to the office.
I am running late for a meeting with the project manager.

positive: clever, effective, stellar

agenda [n] intention or motive to do something
personal agenda: something that someone does only for themselves
group/collective agenda: something that someone does with everyone in mind

a two-month endeavour (four-month, five-year)
an endeavour for two months (four months, five years)

attitude, practise, method.

Scary
Last year in December I travelled to Thailand, Phuket Island with my colleagues. One of the agent was to go to another island far away from Phuket to go scuba diving on a deep level. Because I couldn’t swim, when I jumped into the ocean, I couldn’t breathe very well so I drunk a lot of water. I couldn’t see fish and coral under the water because I was too scared of drowning. After that, I never wanted to scuba dive again.

Last year in December I travelled to Thailand, Phuket Island with my colleagues. One of the travel agents was wanted to go to another island far away from Phuket to go deep sea diving scuba diving on a deep level. Because I couldn’t swim, when I jumped into the ocean, I couldn’t breathe very well so I drunk a lot of sea water. I couldn’t see fish and coral under the water because I was too scared of drowning. After that, I never wanted to scuba dive again.

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Original
The favourite singing show is Singing style by some unfamous, common people, they were unkown by people before they joined in these performances, I prefer to listen to quiet songs because these songs can make me relax. When competitors song these songs, I am willing to support them and watch their performances every time until all of them left the stage.

Correction
My favourite singing show is Singing style by regular some unfamous, common people, they were unkown by the public people before they joined in these performances, I prefer to litsen to quiet songs because these songs can make me to relax. When competitors sing song these songs, I am willing to support them and watch their performances every time until all of them leave left the stage.