F2F Class Notes (Whitney) [S+W]

International [adj] -国际  worldwide, global meaning
Attitude [n] – 态度 a way of thinking about someone or something
Affected [adj] – 影响 influenced by external factors

Original
New Noyk is interntionly city. New York perpon ittture is very good. New York ekonm affected 全球.

Corrected
New Noyk York is an interntionly international city. New York perpon New York poeple/New Yorkers have a great attitude ittture is very good. New York’s  ekonm economy affects everyone  全球.

Upgraded
New York is an international city. New York people (New Yorkers) have a great (civilised/friendly/polite) attitude. New York’s economy affects everyone (the global economy/the whole world). 

Original
Stocks is my hobby. Last month I lose 100,000. I am very sad. This month, I come back, 50,000. A few years I make around 300,000-400,000. I use this money to get a loan to buy a house at my hometown. I think the 贷款利息 is very expensive. I count on myself, not my family.

Corrected
Trading on the stock market is my hobby. Last month I lose lost 100,000 RMB. I am very sad. This month, I came come back 50,000, so I feel a little better. A few years ago I make made around 300,000-400,000 RMB. I use used this money to get a loan to buy a house at in my hometown. I think the interest rate 贷款利息 is very expensive. To buy this house, I relied on myself and not my family.

past tense: lost, made, used, relied 

Focus on terms and phrases needed to navigate around the airport and for international travel.