Profile Update Notes Part 2 (Tony)

Profile Update Part 2:

Writing:

Before: 3.5

After: 4.0

Corrections:

Older Writing Sample:

a new regulation was that says

base on – based on

will access to other operation vendor – Will have access to / will access operational vendors

register company – registered(ADJ.) company

change it to Chinese company – change it to a Chinese company

Newer Writing Sample:

local vendor – a local vendor / the local vendors (A certain group) / local vendors (in general)

enter in NG – enter the NG

enter your name

user can clicks – users can click

Yayun need – Yayun needs (to do sth.)

will no longer to use – will no longer work / will no longer be operational / will no longer be in use

will no longer be valid

your passport/visa is no longer valid

your i.d. isn’t valid, it is expired.

Pronunciation

Corporate – Korr Prett

Corporation – Korr Peray Shun

Cooperate – Koh Opper-rate / Ke Wah Per Rayt

Cooperation – Ke Wah Per Ray-shun