F2F Class Notes (Nicholas) [W]

I forgot to do Sierra’s writing assignment, please copy/paste it from below, and correct next class!

Watch Anthony Bourdain’s show “Parts Unknown”

Original

I love food,so i am always attracted to the food articles or videos especially those videos which teach people how to make a meal in our SE Wechat account. Although I’m not good at cooking, I loving watching these videos which can make me relax and let me image the taste of delicious food especially when I was in the time of dieting for losing weight. Also if the process is not complicated, I’m going to try it.
Another video impresses me a lot which shows a group of women wear the same outfits in different size.These girls have completely different figues,and many of them have never tried this type of clothing before.But they look confident and the suits really suit many of them.I am not confident of my thick curs and nearly try short skirt.I think I should show positive attitude to my figure

Corrected

Grammar

my writing better than my speaking / my writing is better than my speaking

As I know when they got married / As I understand, when they got married / From what I heard, when they got married…

They got married just because of the love / They got married for love / They married for love

man in 20 / man in his 20s / men in their 20s

she is luck / she is lucky

I know many this couple / I know many couples like this

It’s very complicate / It’s very complicated

They relied each other / They relied on each other

…let them to have dinner together / encouraged them to have dinner together

also a lot of family / also a lot of families

don’t have many money / are poor

we order a meal / we ordered a meal

Vocabulary

drug dealer / drug smuggler / he brings illegal drugs into the country and sells them o peoplte

e.g. He deals drugs. He’s a drug dealer

drug users / people who

She satisfied her youth for the man / sacrificed 

love triangle / when three people are in a complicated relationship

e.g. No one wants to get caught in a love triangle.

side chick / Xiao san

Pronunciation

was/ werz / WUH-ZZ

deserves / DUH-ZERVES