F2F Class Notes (Mason)[W]

Write a short article comparing China and America. Use some of the vocabulary words from below.

Vocabulary

Social issue – problems in a society
eg. America’s racial imbalance is still on of it’s largest social issues

Inequality – When people are treated differently
eg. There is inequality in China between the Han and certain ethnic minorities

Gun control – stopping people from having guns
eg. China has very strict gun control laws.

Immigration – The act of leaving one country to live in another
eg. Some people in America are very against immigration.

Demagogue – A leader who uses fear to maintain control
eg. Some people have pointed out Trump’s inflammatory language as evidence of his demagoguery.

Civil rights – the freedoms people have in a society
eg. In America, black people had to fight to get the same civil rights as white people.

Original

My favorite music is pop music, but sometimes i will listen to K-pop as well.I usually listen to music on my way to school or take a shower at home. I like a singer called Angela who is a very famous in China, because her songs and personalities are always inspire people a lot. The first song l can sing was her masterpiece ‘Invisible wings’ and that song even as a topic in the college entrance examination many years ago. However, my favourite song is called ‘ In fact i am okay’. The singer is an actor who had an accident when he acted a movie and his skin was burned. This song tells his experiences and i was deeply in touch by this song. In my daily life, i think i am a confident singer, because i am very good at singing and i took part in our school singing competition for many times and won the first prize.

Revised

My favorite music is pop music, but sometimes i will listen to K-pop as well. I usually listen to music on my way to school or when I take a shower at home. I like a singer called Angela who is a very famous in China because her songs and personality are always inspire people a lot. The first song I could sing was her masterpiece ‘Invisible wings’. That song was even as a topic on the college entrance examination many years ago. However, my favourite song is called ‘ In fact i am okay’. The singer is an actor who had an accident when he acted a movie and his skin was burned. The singer is also an actor, who was burned while filming a movie. This song tells his experiences and I was deeply in touch by this song. In my daily life, i think i am a confident singer, because i am very good at singing and i took part in our school singing competition for many times and won the first prize every time.