F2F Class Notes (Li)[W]

Vocabulary

because of the sickness/illness

chain/franchise

balance/scale: weighing machine

strong/heavy flavoured food

Grammar

if you replace the noun with a pronoun, it’s he/she/it, not this or that 

one of the children/kids/friends/cars/cats (plural)

One of the children is blind.

One of the cats is orange.

Most of the cats are black.

search + for + noun 

search for restaurants/parks/people

Dear sally,

I know you like to eat fried chicken very much, especially after 10.It is really not good for your health. You should stop eating fried chicken every week. After you finish eating that, you will feel guilty.You know the summer is coming. If you eat fried chicken every week and one month later maybe you will be fatter and fatter.

I know one of your friend suggested you to eat cucumbers or tomatoes when you have the feeling to eat something.But she doesn’t know that your problem is not “I am hungry” but “I have a craving for snacks”. So you should find the food which is delicious and healthy. But it is more difficult to find the food instead.

When you want to order the fried chicken, you can use more time to search the restaurants. You start to search it as late as you can, after 10 or later and when you use much more time to search the restaurant which you want to order . As the result , the restaurant is closed. The only thing you can do is just to sleep.

Also, you can invite your friends to a beautiful beach city for traveling. The main things during the traveling is to wear beautiful clothing and take nice photos. In front of the close friends, you will have the pressure to be performed well.It can push you to keep on a diet before the traveling.

I know persuade yourself to stop eating fried chicken is not an easy thing, just have a try.

I look forward to hearing from you the good news.

Best regards.

Sally

Revised: 

Dear Sally,

I know you like to eat fried chicken very much, especially after 10 pm. It is really not good/bad for your health/unhealthy. You should stop eating fried chicken every week. After you finish eating it, you will feel guilty. You know that summer is coming. If you eat fried chicken every week so one month later maybe you will get fatter and fatter.

I know one of your friends recommended you to eat cucumbers or tomatoes when you crave for food. But, she doesn’t know that your problem is not “I am hungry” but, “I have a craving for snacks”. So/Therefore, you should find the food which is delicious and healthy. But, the truth is, it is more difficult to find the food you want.

When you want to order the fried chicken, you can use more time to search for restaurants. You start to search as late as you can – after 10 or later, and when you use more time to search for the restaurant which you want to order from, the restaurant is closed. The only thing you can do is just go to sleep.

Also, you can invite your friends to a beautiful seaside city for traveling. The main point during your trip is to wear beautiful clothing, and take nice photos. You will feel the pressure to perform well in front of your friends. It can push you to maintain your body/go on a diet before travelling/trip. 

Love/XOXO, 

Sally