F2F Class Notes (Lily)[S/W]

what is your actual plan after dropping out from school?

Grammar

they also to like–> they also like
I’m not very like he– > I don’t really like him/ I’m not very into XX 

need to      don’t need to
have to      don’t have to
want to      don’t want to
go to           don’t go to

very + adj= very big, very small, very tall, very ugly

really +like

One of my best friend, she opened a station for a Chinese star. Some take pictures, some upload the pictures. They take pictures and keep the other pictures. Maybe one year later, they do a photo book, and sell the photo book to fans and they can make money. A lot of people opened a station to be a job.

Revised

One of my best friends, she opened a station/created an online platform for a Chinese star. Some of them will take pictures, some of them will upload the pictures. They take the pictures and keep the other ones. Maybe one year later, they will create a photo book, and sell the photo book to fans and they can make money. A lot of people do this for a living. 

I think everyone has an important place they like or miss， maybe cities they traveled to or places they grew up in that made sense.
My favorite place is my elementary school where I got the most happiest five years. When I think about it now, the school wasn’t very big，but I was a kid so it was like a playground. Now I am 18 years old and I often think of the funny things in elementary school when I am disappointed and sad. I remember I wanted to go home so I often went to the school doctor’s office to take my temperature. I remember there was an overpass connecting the two teaching buildings and there was a piano floor on one side. I also remember to hang the towel in the same place in the dorm after washing my face every day.
I remember everything about those days, but time can’t change, the school has also become another building, but those five years are my most precious gift.

Revised

I think everyone has an important place they like or miss, it could be cities they have traveled to or the places they grew up in that made sense.
My favorite place is my elementary school where I had my happiest five years. When I think about it now, the school wasn’t very big，but I was a kid so it was like a playground. Now I am 18 years old and I often think of the funny things in elementary school when I’m down. I remember I wanted to go home so I often went to the school doctor’s office to take my temperature. I remember there was an overpass hallway connecting the two teaching buildings and there was a piano room on one side. I also remember that I used to hang the towel at the same place in the dorm after washing my face every day.
I remember everything about those days, but we can never go back in time, the school has changed to another building, but those five years were my most precious time/ I really treasure those 5 years.