F2F Class Notes (Lily)[S]

Speaking exercise

I got up very early that day at half past five in the morning. One of the groomsman get me to the bridgeroom’s home by his car. We met his mother and sister. His mother looks smart apparently, she prepared breakfast for us, and his sister let a haircut guy to help us make our hair look better. I don’t like the style because he make my head look all back. At eight past eight, we started to go to the girl’s house. It took us 80 mins, they used eight cars, the best one was a Cadillac. When we came to the girl’s house, there are a lot of relatives asked the money for us. I hate the relatives, they show their unpoliteness of wanting the money. I remembered some old women, they asked for the money for many many times. Fortunately, the girl’s friend didn’t make too many fun of us, and let us go to the girl’s room. I found the relative’s quality are not very good. Obviously, compared with the boy’s. But a very embarrased thing was the boy’s parent got divorced very early, his mother let a man who isn’t the boy’s father to welcome them.

Though the girl told me she didn’t want to toast with the relatives of the boys, he said he pretend to look smile.

Revised

I got up very early that day at half past five in the morning. One of the groomsman drove me to the bridegroom’s home by his car. We met his mother and sister. His mother looks smart, she prepared breakfast for us, and his sister got a hairdresser to help us with our hairstyle. I didn’t like the style because he did an “all back”. At eight past eight, we started to go to the girl’s house. It took us 80 mins, they used eight cars, the best one was a Cadillac. When we came to the girl’s house, there were a lot of relatives who asked us for money/ red pockets. I hate the relatives, they revealed their greediness of wanting the money. I remembered some old women, they asked for the money for many many/ numerous/ multiple times. Fortunately, the girl’s friend didn’t make too much fun of us, and let us went to the girl’s bedroom. I thought the relative’s characters were not very good. Obviously, there was a big difference in comparison with the boy’s family. But a very embarrassing thing was the boy’s parent got divorced very early, his mother let a man who isn’t the boy’s father to welcome them.

Though the girl told me she didn’t want to toast with the relatives of the boys, she said she pretended to be happy/ have a smile on her face.