F2F Class Notes (Lily) [S/W]

Pronunciation

group- groop
product- PROduct
delivery= deLIvery
logo= loGO

Grammar

today is the first of September
Today is September 1st.  

my birthday is on Feb 28th 
my birthday is on the 28th of Feb.

Vocabulary

1.platter= 拼盘
ex: seafood platter
ex: fruit platter

2. slippers= 拖鞋
ex: HDL will give you slippers if they see that you are wearing high heels.
ex: do you wear slippers at home?

Speaking

Last night, I ate hotpot with my friends at 2 o’clock am. It was my first time eat hotpot so late. When we finished the hotpot, we ate melon seeds because we were too full. The waiter gave us three times surprises. The first surprise is she put a dessert to us, the second surprise is that she gave us a fruit platter and last one surprise is that she gave us a discount coupon which could be used next time. I asked my friend, why she gave so many things to us, my friend told me because he is the member, he has black member card. I haven’t heard this before. They call it “Black Sea card”, which you have to spend 20,000 yuan in a time, you can get this card. Or you can spend totally 30,000 yuan in a year, you also can get this card.

revised

Last night, I ate hotpot with my friends at 2 o’clock am. It was my first time to eat hotpot this late. When we finished the hotpot, we ate melon seeds because we were too full. The waiter gave us three times surprises. The first surprise was the dessert she gave us she put a dessert to us, the second surprise was that she gave us a fruit platter and last one surprise was that she gave us a discount coupon which could be used next time. I asked my friend, why did she give us so many things to us, my friend told me because he is the member, he has black member card. I haven’t heard about this before. They named  it “Black Sea card”, which you have to spend 20,000 yuan in a single time to obtain/get this card. Or if you can spend a total of 30,000 yuan in a year, you also can get this card.

Writing

Recently, I have been prepared for my online pet store with my friend Cathy. She is responsible for the suppliers and products, and the brand design and store design are my part. In this cooperation,I could get a 40% commission for the profit. After we discussed, we decided that there wouldn’t be much in stock in the early stage because we don’t have enough budget to rent a warehouse to stock inventories, which is also saving cost. We have to control the expense and allocate the resources reasonably. We are dreaming our store would not only be a store but also a brand which reminds of love and warm with pet.

During the store opening preparation, I finished the brand logo and I’m going to design the store style, and my friend will continue to focus on product selection and price the products. The next step is that we need to select a delivery company which could be long-standing cooperation and make a promotion plan. If there will be no accident, the store would be opened in the end of September. We really hope so but we have our own busy work. The most tiresome thing is that putting hundreds of goods on sale and making sure their product details is correct, which would take a lot of our time. But the first step is always the hardest, I have to comfort myself. LOL

Revised

Recently, I have been preparing for my online pet store with my friend Cathy. She is responsible for the suppliers and products, and I am in charge of/ responsible for the brand design and store design are my part. In this cooperation, I could get a 40% commission from the profit. After our discussion, we decided that there wouldn’t be much products in stock in the early stage because we don’t have enough budget to rent a warehouse to stock inventories, which could also save cost. We have to control the expense and allocate the resources reasonably. We hope that our store would not only be a store but also be a brand which reminds people/ pet owners of love and warmth with their pet.

During the preparation of the store opening preparation, I finished the brand logo and I’m going to design the store style, and my friend will continue to focus on product selection and pricing the products. The next step is that we need to select a delivery company which could be would have a stable cooperation with us and make a marketing plan. If everything goes well, the store would be opened in the end of September. We really hope so but we are busy with our own work. The most tiresome thing is to putting hundreds of goods on sale and make sure their product details are correct, which would take a lot of our time/ which would be very time-consuming. But the first step is always the hardest, I have to comfort/convince myself. LOL / LMAO