F2F Class Notes (Lily) [S]

Speaking exercise

This national holiday for me is not very interesting. I will go to be the accompany for a new couple. The task destroyed my plan for travel. I have to go to some place not far away from shanghai for traveling. The new couple is my classmate in university, they were fall in love with each other for 7 years. Originally, almost everyone didn’t think they match each other, because the girl is fat, she is 15 kg fatter than the boy. Not only us, but also the mother of the boy thought his son should have a better girl. During their love, the boy’s mother was unhappy with the girl for many times. I think the weight and appearance is the most important factor for his mother. Of course the girl keep losing weight for the boy, now their weight are equal. I bought a new suit a month ago. In China, there are many bad traditions for the bridegroom, we need to make effort to satisfy every unreasonable needs of the bride and her bridesmaids. All we do will be made into a video, i think it’s very embarrassed.

Revised:

This national holiday will not be very interesting for me . I will be the groomsman for a new couple. The task destroyed my traveling plan. I can only go to nearby areas for traveling. The new couples are my classmates from university, they fell in love with each other for 7 years. Originally, most people didn’t think they were good for each other, because the girl is fat, she weighs 15 kg more than the boy. Not to mention us, even also the mother of the boy thought his son should have/ deserves a better girl. During their love, the boy’s mother was unhappy with the girl for many times. I think the weight and appearance were the most important factors for his mother. Of course the girl lost weight/ went on a diet for the boy, now their weights are equal. I bought a new suit a month ago. In China, there are many bad traditions for the bridegroom, we need to make an effort to satisfy every unreasonable needs of the bride and her bridesmaids. Everything we do will be made into a video, i think it’s very embarrassing.