F2F Class Notes (Li) [S]

Vocabulary

resume: a piece of paper documenting your experiences and educational background

We like to invite some kids to our company every week to make videos. Although the little kids is more cute, the age of the kids in 6 years old to 8 years old. Because they can do better. In China, the students work very hard and busy. Most of the parent, the mum will quit the job and follow the kid’s schedule. I find a interesting thing, if one of the parent can quit job, the kid will do better in school. The mum can teach the kid and always help her. And a lot of kids they’re very busy, they not only go to our company to make videos they also take part in some drama shoots. The mother will become their driver to bring them from one place to another place. They will have their lunch on the car. When I knew some kids they will work or study until 11 o’clock. When they go to primary school, they have a very beautiful resume.

Revised: 

We like to invite some kids to our company every week to make videos. Although the little kids is are more cute, the age of the kids is between 6 years old to and 8 years old because they can do better. In China, the students work very hard and are always busy. Most of the parents, the especially mums will quit the job and follow the kid’s schedule. I find one interesting thing, which is if one of the parents can quit his/her job, the kid will do better in school. The mum can teach the kid and always help him/her. And Also a lot of kids they’re are very busy, they not only go come to our company to make videos they also take part in some drama shoots. The mother will become their driver to bring them from one place to another place. They will have their lunch on in the car. When I know some kids they will work or study until 11 o’clock. When they go to primary school, they will have a very beautiful resume.

Grammar

more better – much better 

be energy – be energetic

not same with us – not the same as us

after next year – the year after