F2F Class Notes (Jacob) [W]

Compare the two theme parks (universal studios & shanghai disneyland).

Vocabulary

Prone (position – to lay down flat on your stomach

Domesticized – to be made into a domestic type of animal
eg. Some people think all animals can be domesticated, but it seems dangerous to try this with a hippo.

Trial run – a short amount of time where you test a product with customers (to find any problems or flaws)
Trial – either a free period, or a discounted price for the first time you use something to try and get customers.

Grammar

The rice was a little hard.
The rice was a little undercooked
The meat was overcooked

Pronunciation

exits

ride [rI-de]

Caribbean [care-a-B-in]

Original

The first time I went to the Shanghai Disneyland, it hadn’t open to the public, it is a test operation. Shanghai Disneyland wanted to know the largest number of visitors that they can handle per day, so they sold a lot of low price tickets to those people who can’t waiting for having a visit. Before I went to there, I had a itinerary for my one day trip in the land. I listed 3 rides which I want to ride. I didn’t have a high expectation for this trip because I knew that there were a large number of people in it and I must take a long time for waiting before I rode the rides. But life is full of unpredictable things. When I passed by one of their popular ride, it was repaired and nobody was waiting behind it. So I decided to wait and just few minutes later, the ride was open and I rode it without a long time wait. That was so great. Shanghai Disneyland is very extensive, not only their land but also their foods. However, I didn’t like the food I tried when I went to there at first time, it was a little hard.
In general, Shanghai Disneyland is amazing. It brings happiness to people and I like it.

Edited

The first time I went to the Shanghai Disneyland, it hadn’t open to the public yet, it is was a test operation trial run. The Shanghai Disneyland wanted to know the largest number of visitors that they could handle per day, so they sold a lot of low priced/discounted tickets to those people who can’t waiting for having a to visit. Before I went to there, I had an itinerary for my one day trip in to the land. I listed 3 rides which I wanted to ride. I didn’t have a high expectation for this trip because I knew that there were a large number of people attending/going in it and I must take spend a long time for waiting before I could ride the rides. But life is full of unpredictable things. When I passed by one of their popular rides, it was repaired and nobody was waiting behind in front of/in line for it. So I decided to wait and just a few minutes later the ride was open and I rode it without waiting a long time. That was so great. The Shanghai Disneyland is very extensive, not only their land but also their foods. However, I didn’t like the food I tried when I went to there the first time. it was a little hard. 
In general, The Shanghai Disneyland is amazing. It brings happiness to people and I like it.