VIP Class Notes (Jacob) [S]

For next class, describe what draws you to Korea and Japan. Also give some details of what you would like to do during your visit.

First correction

I didn’t travel to Asia before HK. But I have to say its an interesting place such as Japan, Korean, Philippines. I think Indonesia will be my next place, I am going will go there. I think compared to Shanghai HK could be a better place to live. It gives you more opportunity to go to the beach and the mountains. There are lots of expats compared to Shanghai.

If I go Thailand or Philippines. I would go there to the beach for the sun. For Korean & Japan, it is the culture. I like to go sightseeing and visiting the culture. I like to discover how they live and think. That’s what I look for.

Final correction

I hadn’t traveled to Asia before I went to HK. But I have to say its an interesting place with countries such as Japan, Korean, and the Philippines. I think Indonesia will be my next place to visit / to go to. I think compared to Shanghai, HK could be a better place to live. It gives you more opportunity to go to the beach and the mountains. There are lots of expats there compared to Shanghai.

If I go to Thailand or Philippines. I would go there to the beach for the sun. For Korean & Japan, it is the culture. I like to go sightseeing and visiting cultural places. I like to discover how they live and think. That’s what I look for.

Grammar

I had a good attitude to towards math.

I did that kind of university- I had this passion for accounting when I began/entered university.

While I attended university

The problems are two – There are two problems

Vocabulary

High school –  The highest level of schooling before university/college.