F2F Class Notes (Jacob) [S]

Vocabulary

Syntax – the structure/grammar of a sentence

Grammar

I want to build some business in this field/industry/area.

If I’m lucky enough

Production line

Before I couldn’t speak more as fluently as now/Now, I am more fluent than before.

Original

First of all, I met an elder person. He is a leader in Shanghai government before. He can give me a lot of professional advice in this field. When I have engineering drawing/design ask to him to find a suitable factory. This is the first stage to me. Next stage, I will focus on some specific components for vehicle factory. If I lucky enough, I can got some very good orders. I plan to found my own production life/factory. Because I want to like my uncle, he had produced more then 30 years.

Edited

First of all, I met an elderly person. He was a leader in the Shanghai government before. He can give me a lot of professional advice in this field. When I have engineering drawings/designs, I can ask to him to find a suitable factory. This is the first stage to for me. Next stage, I will focus on some specific components for a vehicle factory. If I‘m lucky enough, I can get some very good/large/big orders. I plan to found my own production line/factory. Because I want to be like my uncle, he had produced more then 30 years.

Pronunciation

Shelf

Stage

http://international-schools-shanghai.com/shanghai-japanese-school/

https://www.italki.com/partners  (go to language partners section, not paid teachers)