F2F Class Notes [Jacob]

Original Version #2

When was the last time you were disappointed?
There are more web celebrities have been known with the skyrocketing development of the internet. Like web celebrity people, web celebrity stores or food. Some of them are very amazing just like they show in internet, but others are not accept people’s expectations. I want to talk about one web celebrity food I have eaten, which made me disappointed. That is a traditional Chinese food, people usually eat these food during QingMing Festival. They have green scarfskin which made with sticky rice and wine-colored inner core which made with sweetened bean paste. Xing Hua Lou, the famous traditional brand, has innovative about that food. They use dried meat floss instead of sweetened bean paste to make Qingtuan, which was very hot online and always need to wait in line about two or three hours to buy. I’m lucky to eat that web celebrity Qingtuan from my colleague, who waited in line to buy a box of it, said that the Qingtuan was very delicious. I tried it and it is just a salt Qingtuan with nothing special. I’m disappointed about it because I have a high expectation for it.

Edited Version #2

When was the last time you were disappointed?
There are now more web celebrities have been which are known, with the skyrocketing development of the internet. Like web celebrities people, web celebrity there is internet famous stores or and food. Some of them are very amazing, just like they show on internet, but others are not accept don’t meet people’s expectations. I want to talk about one web celebrity internet famous food I have eaten, which made me disappointed. That is a traditional Chinese food, people usually eat this food during QingMing Festival. They have green scarfskin which is made with sticky rice and a wine-colored inner core which is made with a sweetened red bean paste. Xing Hua Lou is the famous traditional brand, has which is innovative about this food. They use dried meat floss instead of sweetened bean paste to make Qingtuan, which was very hot online and now you always need to wait in line about two or three hours to buy. I’m lucky to eat have ate this web celebrity internet famous food Qingtuan from thanks to my colleague who waited in line to buy a box of it. She said that the Qingtuan was very delicious. I tried it and it is just a salt Qingtuan with nothing special. I’m disappointed about it because I had a high expectation for it.

Grammar

I like Shanghai and Hong Kong cuisine. No, I don’t like cooking because when you put the vegetables or meat in the oil it will splash. Before you cook, you need to wash the vegetables and chicken.

Vocabulary

Baking – Cooking bread or goods in an oven.

Write about something your excited for this year, and one goal you want to achieve this year. Give as much detail for both as you can. Try to incorporate some new vocabulary if your able to.