F2F Class Notes (Jacob)

Homework

Writing exercise

OriginalĀ 

I went to Game Center with friends in Sunday afternoon , there is near People square station. It was my second time went to there, I can get stuffed toys much more easy. I tried to do it in other Game Centers, but I never got them, it was really sad when I saw other peoples got them.
We got 160 game currencies cost two hundred RMBļ¼Œwe bought them online and exchanged them in machine. We wanted to catch one toy called ā€œpink popping tiger ā€, we tried to get it six times
after we got one . And then we tried the small one ,the toy called ā€œmini small tight of pink ā€œ They are really really cute, we tried several time but we didnā€™t get one.
We played one game called ā€œgun play ā€œ
two people to play with gun, I felt it was funny and interesting, even though I was lose again and again. After this one we tried car race game of 3D, it was really awesome that I saw the true scene , voice and action , I was excited and felt in the truth car game. My friends tried motorcycle racing and dancing machine, they did good, we were happy. Finally we got three toys, I didnā€™t take them and gave them to my friends. Such a wonderful day, I hope we will find some new interesting things to do next time when we meet.

1.Refixture
2.outfit / the outfit layer
3.stockman
4. Reference
Proposal to Mar week4 window outfit to HK and China shop for the Asia market needs,they prefer the outfit layer more lighter and color more brighter to draw the customers attention and enhance the sale.

Edited version:

I went to theĀ Game Center with friendsĀ on Sunday afternoon. ItĀ is near Peoples square station. It was my second time I went/to go there. I can get stuffed toys much more easilyĀ there. I tried to do it in other Game Centers, but I never got them and it was really sad when I saw other people get them.
We got 160 tokens thatĀ costsĀ two hundred RMB, we bought them online and exchanged them in machine. We wanted to catch one toy called ‘pink popping tiger’,Ā Ā on the 7th time we got one. Then we tried to winĀ the toy called ‘pink mini tiger’. They are really really cute, we tried several times but we didnā€™t get one.
We played one game called ‘gun play’, weĀ only got two guns so we couldn’t all play/so two of us had to watch.Ā I felt it was funny and interesting, even though I was losing again and again. After this one we tried a 3DĀ car racing game and it was really awesome thatĀ it felt realĀ with voice and action. I was excited and feltĀ truely in car game. My friends tried motorcycle racing and dancing games, they did good and we were happy. Finally, we got three toysĀ but I didnā€™t take them and gave them to my friends. Such a wonderful day and I hope we will find some new interesting things to do next time when we meet.

1. RefixtureĀ (Discuss in next class)
2. outfit / the outfit layer – this means a set of clothes that are worn together
3. Stockman (Discuss in next class)
4. Reference – this means to talk about something else that is relevant to your discussion

Proposal to Mar week4 window outfit to HK and China shop for the Asia market needs,they prefer the outfit layer more lighter and color more brighter to draw the customers attention and enhance the sale.

The proposal for March week 4 window outfit for HK & China shops. Shops need lighter and more bright colors to draw the customers attention and enhance the chance of a sale.


Vocabulary

Inventory –Ā stuff that you have (maybe to sell)

Tokens –Ā small coins that you can use at a specific place

Ā Told you its peoples square šŸ˜‰