F2F Class Notes (Jacob)

Review the grammar from this glass.

Vocabulary

Mole – a small animal that lives underground; and a small brown spot that grows out on our skin

Grammar

Who is gooder better than

Who can judgement

I came – This is only used when your at the same place your talking about, if its a different place then use ‘I went’

Staff/Family/Team ….member

I was prevented from going, seeing, doing

piece of paper – but not used for application, contract, or any documents

I worried that there is not enough time.

Original 

This morning I had an appointment with a skin’s professor in Huashan Hospital. I came there at 8.10 a.m , I got a number from the professor. But that just a number because I need to queue in a line that are also had appointment by the professor. So I waited for 3 hours, from 8.30 a.m to 11.30.
When I came into the professor’s office, she complaining said:“why did you came in directly” you couldn’t wait for a lone time.
Actually, a staff who is prevent me into the office, she said you need queued in a order. That’s why I waiting there.
The professor advices me that I need to cut a black sign on the right side of my back. She gave me a piece of application paper that I can made another appointment for operation
Aa~~when I came the operation room, I looked at a massage was pasted on the door. It said the lunch break is from 11.30 to 1.30 p.m. So I had to waited for one half hour. I really wanted to scream because I hasn’t finish my schedule. I worry about that time is not enough.
Finally. When I finished that and go outside of the hospital at 2 p.m, the wether was rainy. That’s terrible.

Edited

This morning I had an appointment with a skin’s doctor professor in Huashan Hospital. I came went there at 8.10 a.m , I got a number from the professor. But thats just a number because I need to for queuing in a line that are for people who also had appointment by with the professor. So I waited for 3 hours, from 8.30 a.m to 11.30.
When I came went into the professor’s office, she was complaining and said:“why didn’t you come in directly? You couldn’t didn’t need to wait for a long time”.
Actually, a staff member who is prevented me from going into the office, she said “you need to queued in a order”. That’s why I waited there./So I had to wait there.
The professor advised/suggested to/told me that I need to cut a black sign mole on the right side of my back. She gave me an piece of application paper that so I could make another appointment for an operation
Aa~~when I came went to the operation room, I looked at a message that was posted on the door. It said the lunch break is from 11.30 to 1.30 p.m. So I had to waited for one and a half hour. I really wanted to scream because I hadn’t finished my schedule (workload). I worried about that there is not enough time.
Finally. When I finished that and go went outside of the hospital at 2 p.m, the weather was rainy. That’s It was terrible.