F2F Class Notes (George) [W]

Homework

Check out NaNoWriMo=  National Novel Writing Month

Vocabulary

Solar- Energy that comes from the sun.

e.g. Many street lights use solar to power themselves.

Writing exercise

Original

What he keeps doing in the next 20 days, maybe very small things, but if you keep you will get a change. And keeps write words and then 30 days past then he write , I’m not sure if he become a novelist. I think it’s only 30 days but it’s still very hard to keep doing.  In this summer I kept running every evening, I run almost one hour, but when the weather became cold, I gave up. I have no idea if I can restart in next spring.

Corrected

What he keeps doing for the next 20 days, is that he starts to change very small things in his life. If it’s small you are more likely to keep the change. He kept writing words and then when 30 days passed he wrote a novel. I’m not sure if he became a novelist. I think even 30 days is still very hard to do.  This summer I kept running every evening, I ran almost one hour, but when the weather became cold, I gave up. I have no idea if I can restart next spring.