F2F Class Notes (Celeste/Ruby) [S]***

Write a story about your favorite season and try to use some of the vocabulary and grammar below.

Vocabulary

I want to reach / achieve / get /obtain 6.5
I want to achieve 6.5 but I really want to reach higher/more than 7.0

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holidays – everyone celebrates sth
vacations – personal time / annual leave

Grammar

I come to Birmingham / I have come to Birmingham – I have gone to Birmingham / I went to Birmingham

My sister with me come to Philippines for travel
My sister and me went to Philippines for travel 
My sister and I went to the Philippines for vacation / to travel 

for nouns vs. to verbs
eg. For vacation vs. to travel

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where = and at that place
eg. My sister and I went to the Philippines where the locals are very nice.
eg. I come here where I can study English.
eg. I come go to Pure Yoga Studio where I study learn/practice yoga.

Original from Demo

just last month i traveled with my sister who is come from LA she together with me to phil, long beach, we stayed in the hotel almost the time and swimming and to get some photo and just you know have some bar get some wine at night it’s really very relax and we are all very busy, and i have long time no meet with my sister.

Ruby’s corrections

Last month i traveled to the Philippines with my sister who had come from LA. In the long beach, we stayed in the hotel most of the time and went swimming and got some photos and just you know had some drink in the bar at night. It felt very relax and normally we don’t have many time to have connection because we are all very busy, and i had a long time no meet with my sister.

Celeste’s corrections

Last month i traveled to the Philippines with my sister who had come from LA. We stayed in a hotel in Long Beach, and/where most of the time we went swimming and took some photos and just you know had some drinks in the bar at night. It felt very relax and normally we don’t have many time to have connection because we are all very busy, and i had a long time no meet with my sister.