F2F Class Notes (Celeste/Howie) [W]

Next class: Edit the story below.

Writing exercise

How was your trip to Thailand? What did you do in Thailand?
(who, what, where, when, why, and how?) [first, second/next, third/then, finally]

My tip to Thailand was well. My parents and I went to Thailand one week ago. Because I wanted to play with my friend. First we went to airport by car. Next we went to chek-in. Then we went to the gate. Finally we went to Thailand by aeroplane.

First we ate lunch. Next we went to  sleep. One day evryone played at there. We rode elephant and we went to beach and than I played with my friend. Another day, evryone went to W hotel and we ate afternoon tea there. We went to Shanghai 2 days ago.